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January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you update frequently, because you have me sucked in! I like the first person approach, and I like where this is going so far. It doesn't seem to fall into the stock set of situations that people throw these characters into, and I really appreciate that. I like Andie a lot, and I like seeing her featured so prominantly in this story.. This is fabulous and I am addicted. If you published it all tonight I would stay up reading to the end, without sleep, I think.
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January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When you made the comment about Zabini's mother's hat. I just laughed. I have seen some outrageous hats in my day. Sounds like Andi needs a grief counselor. Harry will find Draco. Maybe he knows something about blood curses. Excellent chapter.
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ah, dammit. my lap top crashed and i haven't had a chance to check in recently. do you have a copy, i have a horrible feeling it may have gone into junk and since i wasn't about to rescue it... sigh. I hate using this freaking glitchy clunker of compy but it's better than nothing... which is what i had otherwise.
At any rate, it's an interesting chappie. though i gotta admit who didn't see Har voluneering to go and check on malfoy for her. I mean common. it was so gonna happen. :P.
Poor Har, he just hasn't had much experience with being a comforter huh? still, he's doing his best and it shows. I can't wait to see what'll happen next chappie... and blood curses. is there such a thing and is it dogging the black line...
bump ba baaaa!
*cues dramatic music tune in next for chappie for further intrigue. ^^
At any rate, it's an interesting chappie. though i gotta admit who didn't see Har voluneering to go and check on malfoy for her. I mean common. it was so gonna happen. :P.
Poor Har, he just hasn't had much experience with being a comforter huh? still, he's doing his best and it shows. I can't wait to see what'll happen next chappie... and blood curses. is there such a thing and is it dogging the black line...
bump ba baaaa!
*cues dramatic music tune in next for chappie for further intrigue. ^^
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to read your story, I absolutely love the pairing, but the warning for character death has hold me back so I read it only now. And I know, I know I'll end crying several times before the end, but I don't think I'll be able to set the story aside.
Usually I don't like too much the POV, it's easy to lose control of the characters but it seems you don't have this problem: Harry is amazing and you manage to describe his emotions and thought as well as those of the others as he sees and feels them. And even if his interest for Draco is a little bit fast given their relationship at school and during the war, it's wellbalanced and not too unrealistic.
Wish you update soon.
Usually I don't like too much the POV, it's easy to lose control of the characters but it seems you don't have this problem: Harry is amazing and you manage to describe his emotions and thought as well as those of the others as he sees and feels them. And even if his interest for Draco is a little bit fast given their relationship at school and during the war, it's wellbalanced and not too unrealistic.
Wish you update soon.
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story! Is there any way you can email me when you update? My email is bloodscarletdark@gmail.com. thanks!
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The death of a parent is never easy. Draco has lost the people who were the most important to him. Nothing that Harry could say would make a difference. Sad but true.
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the first chapter and totally prepared to read a good tear jerker (well not really emotionally xD) can't wait to read the other chapters as it progresses on
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When you promised fast reviews you weren't kidding and that's awesome to see an author that keeps to their word and I can see that with the promised angst already. Definitely going to keep up with this story
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, didn't know we were meant to add e mails. um, well mings ckestra@hotmail.com then.
Goodness, that's one heck of stone to drop in their only just becoming tranquil pond. what a kicker. I wondered how you were going to introduce draco and what a dramatic way to do it.
Har means no harm but he's probaby the last person Draco wants to see right now... though har does make a nice target to lash out at. :p
Goodness, that's one heck of stone to drop in their only just becoming tranquil pond. what a kicker. I wondered how you were going to introduce draco and what a dramatic way to do it.
Har means no harm but he's probaby the last person Draco wants to see right now... though har does make a nice target to lash out at. :p
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January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
off to a good start. I look forward to seeing where u take this.