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for You Set Fire to the Rain

by icicle33

person elementalwitch
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I could devour this story whole.. *gah* Every update I read I keep thinking 'noooo the scroll bar is coming closer to the end of the chapter, nooo..' If you updated daily, I would still want it faster LOL, just can't seem to get enoughh of this one.

*chuckle*

Quite good, brilliant even. You don't dissapoint..
person Margyy
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Draco! I love the idea of him in his pjs!! Haha Poor Harry is gonna get it now :(
person elementalwitch
schedule February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well done again.. I look forward to reading more of this story- it's one of teh first I check for updates :)I like reading things that take these characters where they aren't usually sent plotwise, and you're doing a fabulous job. New concept gets two thumbs up!
schedule February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i can relate to rough weeks. female troubles kicked my arse and then i had to put down one of my pets on top of that... and my body responded in its usual way, pain and more or less complete immobilization of my legs... i fell down twice that day. >>
*does my best voice impersonation. "help me, i've fallen and i can't get up" *wails.
fortunately there were sympathetic females and some nice big burly blokes both times to help pick me up... and i got to career around the local shopping center on a motorized scooter thingie for the first time. that was fun, even if i did crash a few times and get told off by an elderly bloke for going to fast.

any who, har is screwed, sca wooooooooooed. still, serves him right for giving in to his inner five year old brat. Andie's going to tear him a new one, bet on it. I hope she does forgive him though, cause har is kicking himself over it pretty hard... and pls, pls don't let har do anything stupid like attempting to leave before he makes things worse. You know he would, he'd take the weight of the world on his shoulders given half a chance... oh, wait, he did that already. :P
person Margyy
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!! I can't wait for more updates! Once a week is not enough :(
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Quite an amazing and inspired piece. I love the fact that you are taking it slow and allowing a gradual rise in feelings, for both characters. It is often hard to accept a story where they, two complete enemies, just turn around one day and fall into each others arms, in complete sexual bliss. Bullocks!
Keep up the good work, and I'll be following along, at the back of the roller coaster, my favorite position.
person Aven Blackblood
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love this story thus far!! please tell me you are continueing it? its so well written, i love it! cant wait to read more ^^
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yep, i can understand that. if feels very character study ish. Malfoy never ignored har in school though... except for possibly during sixth year but that was perfectly understandable.
take your time with the updates if you need to, RL can be a real bitch.
the odds on him coming back and finding draco gone are pretty good so if he wants to put his 'plan' such as it is, into effect he'd better move his tail.
person ladykanasewing
schedule January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story so far, so many stories with Harry and Draco are them having a little issue but instantly in love after that, so this is refreshing. No nail biting cliff hanger this time but now to wait for poor Draco to wake up
person nicola
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i love this story!