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for You Set Fire to the Rain

by icicle33

person Jan
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, though short that it was, this last part of chapter 18 was hot!!

Can't wait for chapter 20 to be updated ^_^
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally Harry realised he was being an idiot! I am glad they are together now, and i loved the last scene of this chapter!
person elementalwitch
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting and watcing for this, and soooo glad I was able to catch it right away. I would definitely say it was worth teh wait and I really can't wait to see where it goes from here. I am so glad they are finally getting through some of the walls that separate them!

You know I think this is my favorite kind of story too- it's so completely plausible in so many ways. When you write the structure and the function points are on, so it flows without nagging at my mind (nothing kills a story for me like poor execution) After that if it's too far fetched and ridiculous, I won't carry on. But this kind of story- THIS is what really works for me. It's so real- I see people all around me doing this dance every single day and so many of them never have the ah ha moment these boys just got. It was awesome!!

I had another surgery last week :( so I have been laid up a bit more, but better now, for sure, and it gives me a chance to read.. I will be relegated to bed for a little while more, so the reading material is greatly appreciated *grins* (Okay maybe that was a plea for another chapter soon.. but you must admit you have a following here, and we are addicted to knowing what's next!!)

schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! Harry took his head out of his arse! Good luck boys!!!
person Claudia
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I never reviewed before, but i wanted you to know i absolutely love your story. Thank you so much for writing this!
person WombatVine
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic as always! Poor Harry finally had a chance to get what he wanted and squandered it in his hurt. Hopefully he will get the chance to apologize.
person Night Owl
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic - Harry really does tend to internalize thing way too much! I am very excited to read the next chap... thanks for a good read!
person Fede
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say I started reading today morning, and on every chapter I wanted to thank you for it, but I just couldnt stop reading: you have an amazing story by now! Please dont leave us without a final chapter!
Thank you for the great time you gave me today: I will be looking for the next chapters! You are a writter, really...
Fedia

( I do apologise if my comment has grammatic mistakes, I am a Spanish speaker -mexican- and I do read english better than I writte it!)
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Both of them are being stupid!!!
person elementalwitch
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh more Draco! I like this insight.. much more, more more! I like the description he gives (or rather that you give him to give *grin*) Quite the way we look at like in our house too, really. Though I would like to give Harry a good solid smack to the back of the noggin for finding solace in the bottom of a bottle, I suppose it makes sense. I rather look forward to seeing him jump back into the fray, even with a head ducked down though.. now that he's got the opening from Draco, maybe he'll be able to make some headway? Kudos to Draco for being able to say it all out like that FINALLY! WOOHOO!! Doing much better BTW.. thank you! Have been looking forward to this update too- brought a big smile to my face to see tehir progress :)