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Draco is soo pathetic I want to cry.

sorry, almost missed reviewing this chapter,I get in the reading mood and forget, the forward/next chapter is so easy to hit...
good chapter, had me almost sitting on the edge of the seat/ the tension was there, not too much, but just enough. like the kids, they are often the truth in the story as in real life..."out of the mouths of babes"
on to the next chapter!

This is a good story a little too ooc for my tastes but still good and why did you have to change their names? Harry's name is supposed to be Harry James Potter, Harry isn't short for anything. And Draco is just Draco Lucius Malfoy. I hate it when people change their names. It's like they are different people, which makes it harder to read, especially when you have Draco acting like a whiney little girl and Harry being the one in control of everything. Though Ron is still in character but everyone else isn't. I'm not flaming though, so don't get mad. Just giving my input. Cause I do like this, it's just different.

I never got what Harry saw in Ginny, they just don't go well together.

So you gave Draco female parts? why? and why do you have Draco turning into a girl, it's like he can't do anything for himself. Though, I love that Harry divorced Ginny, I just don't get why you had to totally change Draco's entire personality. Don't hate me I'm just being honest.

Now Draco's having triplets? what the hell? It's not really that possible for a person to have twins or triplets if it's not genetic, which it's not in either the Potter/Evans or the Malfoy/Black. You need to do some re-search before you post. This story is good, just, somethings are kind of annoying.

Sorry for being a pain but Harry isn't short for anything, he's just Harry James Potter not Harrison Jaime Potter, eww, and Draco is just Draco Lucius Malfoy not Draconis Lucius Abraxas Malfoy. I hate when people do that. Can't names just stay the same? why does there have to be all this name change.

I really like your story. I love the twist and all of the connections. I really hope you write more because I can't wait to read more!

I am really enjoying this story and i can't wait to read more

this story is getting so wild and i really love it...i hope that draco has another little one soon...great story look forward to more