rate_review Reviews

ahh poor sweet Harry. You should have Snape save him and then Harry goes and lives at snape manor or spinners end with snape for the rest of the summer on dumbledores orders. Maybe there should be a conversation between snape and Harry where Harry asks if masturbation is bad becuase the Dursleys said it was. Snape should obviously tell its not bad. I also think it would be good if snape walked in on Harry masturbating.
just a few ideas of how i think the story could go
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i think the stories need a bit more detail to them, such as how tight her pussy is or how big or not so big harry's cock is since he is only 11, 12 and 13 it should not be much bigger is girth and length then your middle finger of an adult so about 3 to 4 inches long.

i think the one about harry and seamus could have been a bit longer such as a talk between them where seamus tells harry that the fact it is a guy sucking him off means nothing about harry being gay because a blow job is a blow job no matter if the lips doing it belong to a guy or girl. an as a result of that talk harry gets woken up every morning by seamus the same way namely a morning blow job.

i like this story i hope you keep it going even thou it sounds like a one shot. you could always do other firsts for harry as other chapters. such as harry getting his first blow job from one of the creevey brothers who starts out spying on harry in the shower and can not help himself but to enter the shower with harry and start sucking him off,with harry being so horny at the time he does not even notice his hand has been replaced by someones mouth until after he nuts. or harry the first time he gives anal sex to one or both creevey brothers. also what happens when harry gets walked in on by granger over christmas break at hogwarts such as she blows him then he gets his first look and taste of a real girls pussy. also if everyone other then harry and granger went home for the holiday they could try sex all over the dorms and common room. an since granger likes to read there is no telling what books she has gotten her hands on to so she may turn out to want to try all kinds of kinky things.