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HAHAHA! I loved this last chapter! I've been enjoying this fic (with the exception of the M/M parts) but this last one was simply hilarious! The only complaint I have is the way you described Luna.(I admit it, I am a Luna-phile!)

so do you plan on harry getting detention with hagred since you say he only sucks big cock then hagred would likely have the biggest. it would also be nice if you added more details about the sex act it's self. an yes i do like the fact you added more details about the people such as big boobs or harry ass or how tight or loose a pussy may be and such.your details now are more or less he stuck his penis ios humped a few times and then is done. i think details such as the fact a pussy or ass was so tight he had to use a lubrication charm three times before he could even get his cock half way in would help plus how his dick felt as if it was being crushed in a vice or that the persons dick was so big that when he tried to suck it that the persons dick infact went half way down his throat. also details such as he was sucking on the head of the guys dick like a lolly pop just bobbing up and down over and over or that he slowly licked up and down the full length as the veins of the cock nearly burst from their skin in exsitement with his teasing. or how he was sucking on the persons ball in and out of his mouth as if the balls were grapes on a vine. maybe how after harry managed to finally get the whole cock down his throat he stopped and rubbed his nose in the sweet musty smelling pubic hair and even managed to get some of those hairs stuck between his teeth in hopes of saving them to try to enjoy their smell and taste later. an if harry really likes big cock why not try a centure their horse half should have one of if not the biggest dick around so much so that even after harry gets it all the way to his belly he is only 1/4th the way down it's shaft.

every time harry seems to run into a girl with a hairy pussy he seems to run away as if the devil himself were after him, so why not try using a shaving spell on the girl to give her a nice clean pussy like the ones he is used to seeing in the wizarding porn books that get passed around the dorms? then you can go into detail about how he gives her oral sex and even about him trying and in the end finding the girls g-spot and playing with it with his index finger while his thumb is playing with her nub over and over till she ends up having several orgasms and is will to do ANYTHING harry wants in hopes of a repeat of his finger fun. if you wanted you could have harry having many first with one person namely tonk's since she can change her looks to be anyone harry wants he could have his perfect idea of ginny one day and his perfect idea of whichever male the next all with the same woman. so if he wants a hairless pussies ginny with oversized boobs the size of watermelons and an ass so full it could hold a whole dinner plate with her ass whole being so tight he has to use 3 lubrication charms just to fit half way in he can have it. now of course how you get around the fact that tonk's does not like to change her shape to please a guy is that harry talks her into him helping her out on a stake out in knockturn alley that ends up lasting several days and harry potter turning up at a seedy inn several nights in a row with different people would not draw attention because everyone who wants to step out on thier girlfriend or wife come to this same inn. an how harry finds out about tonk'sd stake out is that they start talking while she is on guard duty over the summer. heck you could even have harry himself try polyjuice potion to try out what sex is like for the girl if you want.

harry seems at least in the last chapter to wanting nothing more then to fuck ginny in the ass. now if ginny does not want harry but luna does want harry try polyjuice on luna so she looks like ginny. that way harry gets the best of both worlds, he gets a girl who is willing to let him do as he wants to her and gets the girl he really wants. polyjuice potion will make luna look just like ginny big ass nice tits and all. if you want you can even have luna do it secretly so that harry never even knows he is not fucking ginny.

if harry polyjuiced luna do look like ginny he could do anything he wanted be it face fucking her so hard that she nearly gags on his manhood or fisting her in the pussy to the point he nearly has his whole arm up to the elbow shoved into her or even use an enlarging potion on himself to go from 7 inches to 21 inches and try to shove all 21 inches up her ass. or he could use a spell to increase his amount of cum to the point were she nearly chokes trying to down it all since harry of course will not let her waste it by spitting it out. an when she looks as if she may try to remove his dick before he is threw he grabs her by her long red hair again since that is what he was holding while face fucking her and he slaps her upside the head and threatens to cut off what little boobs she does have if she losses so much as a single drop which by the time harry does pull out of her mouth is so full of his seed that her cheeks are puffed out like a chipmunk.

magic seems to do great things such as make your dick bigger without spells. you say harry's cock is about 2/3 of the length of his holy wand which means it should be seven inches or so and cedric is twice harry's size thereby making cedric about 14 inches. now from what studies say the average white male is only 5 to 6 inches in length, so as i said magic seems to do great things.

it would seem from the last chapter that harry may have not decided he is gay but at least bisexual since it seemed he liked anal sex and the bigger the cock the better.so what is next harry trying to see if he likes sucking dick as much as he seems to like getting them up the ass?

now one thing i have never understood about the wizarding world is their double standard toward contracts? they will not allow a child to sign a permission slip to go to hogameade but they will allow a 14 year old to take part in the tri-wizard tournament without permission. i would think that people like malfoy would take advantage of something like this by tricking younger students into signing contracts that turn them into slaves for the purebloods. an yes i know this would be left out of the cannon story because it did not fit and would distract from the story. now harry did try anal sex with krum and did not seem to like it much but if harry were to try it with others such as people who he had saved from being slaves who were say younger and did not have a hairy ass like krum he may decide he indeed did like fucking people in the ass.

the talk between harry and seamus i mentioned could show up in a flashback when harry starts thinking about anal sex and who he can pick for his first partner at that since an ass is an ass no matter who it is on. i also think no one would think twice about harry being followed around by granger or the creevey brother even when they are following him into his dorm. of course if you want you seem to be going one sex event a year so for fouth year you could have all four tri-wizard contestants have sex together as some sort of unwritten rule such as the one that says cheating is allowed.

now if you did decide to use my idea about harry and the 3 other tri-wizard contestants having to have sex you could have harry worry about not matching up to cedric or victor in length or grith so that as he is undressing he uses an enlarging charm on his cock and goes from 4 inches to 8 or even 12 inches and as thick as your wrist. an of course in the back of wizarding porn books you would also likely find spells to keep you hard for hours as well as spells to allow you to shoot load after load of sperm for hours.