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for Be careful what you wish for

by KusanoSaku

person Anon
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good job
person Chibi-chan
schedule March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I give this story an "O". Nicely done and, please, update soon!
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a brilliant story, and a kick-ass Luna. Can't wait to see what happens when they take on the Wizengamot!
person Mya Malfoy
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not trying to be pushy or anything, but I was wondering if you were going to update this story any time soon? I love it and I want to see what happens with the Twins and Harry/Draco/Blaise. And Severus. And Andromeda. And Luna. And everyone else! Please update again soon!
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awe just when it was getting good *pout* I'm slightly shocked that you didn't include some nice chuvash claiming a few chapters back you have a bunch of fics going so I understand the long wait on a lot of them. also so you know I am Csweaver that reviewed your unlikely heros fics. I wanted to compliment you on keeping true to JKR character traits mostly in Harry this is one of the few fics I've seen his righteous anger grow to it's perfection bringing Luna into that anger is a simply brilliant maneuver. I have never been more scared of Lady Lovegood in such a delicious way. this is the first (I think) that I've seen you write a straight sex scene. It was done amazingly well. cudos for finding a way for Fred to have her virginity and have the emotional strain of ronald's fetus.
schedule April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO!!! George/Seamus AND Harry/Draco/Blaise! Hot hot HOT! You must really love us!!

And the flower love letters between Fred and Hermione .... beautiful. You've turned me into a Fremione shipper, for sure. :D

Great chapters, keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next one!
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wish I could remember the song about "round and round"...seems that is where this going...love it!
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my favorites now! I love this story. Its gentle and funny, with enough twists to keep it exciting. Thanks so much for sharing it with us, and I really, really hope you finish.
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
glad to see another chapter, even with so much going on with all of them, it's good to see them all with some sort of plan and finding their places with someone to care for each of them. keep up teh good work :)
person Mya Malfoy
schedule February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it was a good cry, believe me. I loved the new chapter! George and Seamus was hot, and I can't wait until Charlie either figures it out, or Viktor finally gets frustrated and pushes him up against a wall and snogs the life out of him. And I'd love to see Percy with Oliver. If it doesn't fit the story, I, of course, will understand. I know how a muse can be a bitch. :P Can't wait for the next update, thank you so much for an awesome chapter!