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Your authors note for the last chapter doesn't make sense. Given that this is aff. Or was that meant for ff.net?

chapter 13/12a the lemon scene is missing it said itll be here on adultfan but its notably

Um on aft you can post the most hardcore of stories and it won't get taken down

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LOL, that was hilarious... a bit more chaotic, but brilliant :D

Please update chapter 53 soon ^_^

Oh my God. And that was only part of the pranks planned! I'm glad the food fight was in there! I can't wait til the next update!

Seriously sweet story. Can't wait until we reach the end of the story. Keep up the good writing but don't get caught up in fleshing it out too much.

I'm really enjoying this story. It's well written and thought out with the characters well done. I just re-read the story from the beginning and can't wait to read more of it. Fantastic job :)


On a technical note I know you had to change the dracken to Chuvash in the story and I thought I'd let you know that you missed Chapter 14 in changing it over. I know what it's like to have to change something in a long story (be it a name or what have you) and I know it can be easy to miss an area without realizing it.

Wow!!! Great chapter!!!

Outstanding as usual! I can hardly wait for the updates! The amount of detail you put into your work is amazing. Thank you for such a wonderful story.