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for Unlikely Heroes

by KusanoSaku

schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't bad at first, but it's now heading for Poor or Troll for me. What's the point of having EVERYBODY and their mother speaking parseltongue? I kind of defeats the whole purpose if you dilute the importance of it. There are so many things connected to that ability, even though it might seem minor, changing that changes a lot about the story, too much. Also, parseltongue can NOT be taught. It's an ability that's gained through genetics (or magic in Harry's case). If everybody and their mother is a parseltongue, why is it feared? Why couldn't any 'old body open the Chamber of Secrets. Why a lot of things? That one thing, small as it seems, has really taken the story in a silly direction, though mostly because you bring it up/use it constantly. Definitely P or T for me.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think it is great, despite being short. I can't wait until the Ravanclaw prank involving the alarm-clocks goes off!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh!!! I wonder which school will get the highest points this time. Have the other two school moved in yet?
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is written twice :) Love the story
person ChaosLady
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aah! This is what I was thinking of. When are you going to get on with the prank war? And when are you going to explain Peeves' claim that Dumbledore is not quite a man? Excellent chapter! Update soon!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Does make me wonder. Blaise is sooo after Charlie. How can Charlie not know?
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon. i love reading about this wild prank war its so much fun not to mention i want to see how the plot contiues.

please update soon
person Rayne
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:) so I want more! I got really into this, and at first thought I wouldn't really like it but as it went on I got into it more. :) and your plot has sense to it! It actually blends together instead of piecing together. So shoot me an email when you update please?? :)
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am totally confused, was this chapter supposed to be posted 3 times on one page? did you realize that you did this?
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* that chapter ended too soon.