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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Harry slept in the closet under the stairs, that wasn't anywhere in the kitchen. It was more like a storage closet not a kitchen cupboard. But this story is good so far.
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realize this was going to be an alternate universe, you should have mentioned that. Less confusing.
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That whole chapter(s) totally confused me. Why is chapter 12 written twice? you should check that out. And you should also mention that the characters would be really ooc. Like Harry, who is shy, quiet and someone who cries a lot which we all know, in the books he's not like that. And I cannot picture, in a million years, that Dumbledore would call anyone a slut or even a whore. That's just so weird.
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Alvin and the Chipmunks, that's what it sounds like. I would never name my child Alvin, even if it were the last name on the planet. I just don't like it.
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is different. Not different bad, different good. Though there are a few things that confuse me, I'm really enjoying reading this. And I do love Dumbledore and Weasley bashing. Except for bashing of the twins since they are my favorite characters. People just know how to make Dumbledore just as worse as Voldemort, you as well. I wonder if there will be Ginny bashing. She is my least favorite character, I can't stand her at all. I'm going to keep reading.
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see Remus in a switch role. Top to Severus, but bottom to Lucius. At the time of a full moon, maybe go full Dom Mode on both, though. That would be cool.
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like George's prank!
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October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so much. I can't wait to go to the next chapter. I would love to have another chapter with Remis Severus and lucious going at it. I am happy to see Lucius accepting Remus more. In one of the chapters you mentioned Dracken instead of Chuvash.
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October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story! It has a lot of twists and turns and I can hardly wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
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October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story, but it hasn't been updated for almost 2 months! Has it been abandoned??? PLEASE, MERLIN, NO!!!