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in regards to chapter 10, making this draken leader named sirius black is going to get very confusing considering harry's godfather is sirius black

nice story so far, i still feel like parts are rushed, and you tend to have the characters just dump large amounts of information with no lead in to the topic, but overall the plot's really interesting and the relationship between the main characters is complex and thought out. cant' wait to see how sev, luc, and remus manage to work things out between tehm, not to mention seeing what harry's thoughts on him having a destined mate are going to be. keep up the good work, can't wait to see where you go with this

I like the story so far. However, are there 2 Sirious Blacks or just one. If so, the letter to Snape was inappropriate if he is someone who is going to help them. Just confused.

Really enjoying this story so far. Love protective Malfoys!!

Little too much info overload with the Black decendants but overall like the level of detail involved.

Can't wait for more.

Poll wise, I think he should become pregnant at the same stage he was when the spell was cast.

I think that this story is outstanding. I hope they become pregnant

I like the idea of Severus as Harry's saviour.

I had a thought after chapters 4-5. If Severus is the last Prince. And Dumbledore deliberately made him unable to bear children in order to maniuplate him (knowing he wouldn't spy if he had a family to protect) and since Sev was carrying, knew Severus preferred wizards. Can they charge Dumbles with some sort of line theft (deliberately ending an ancient line) or something, and claim all of the Dumbledore assets for the prince line? I know dumbles is a half blood, and his father probably lost most everything when he was convicted of attacking muggles and sent to Azkaban, but after 150 years, Albus has accumulated some rare and dangerous books and power... He could have a personal stash of Founder books (eventhough he couldn't read the slytherin ones) and maybe there is a parseltounge healing spell that Harry can use? Just a few ideas... have at 'em.

good story so far. please continue to write chapters regulaly.
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nice start to things, a little rushed feeling in places like with sev and luc bonding, but overall it really works. i like that draco is till havning to get past his old impulses and work at being nicer. keep up the good work, i look forward to seeing where you go with this