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for Unlikely Heroes

by KusanoSaku

schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised Dora didn't go to Deerfield to see what the old coot was doing there
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully done of Ted to get Percy and Oliver to mourn together. Laughing at Draco getting a hard on due to Harry's moaning. LOL. Nice of Gred and Forge to ask for Harry's forgivness. They can help to cover Harry's back when he returns to Hogwarts.
person She-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love your story can I give you an EO Exceeding Outstanding? Lol I think that should be a new mark its what you deserve! Please add me to your emailing list if you have one for updates!
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Dumbles gets his butt kicked HARD
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent that the Wesley men are standing up for Percy. Sad about how Sev was treated by his father. Slow painful death is to good for the Dursely's
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the end of the trial
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww poor percy, love luc stepping in to help oliver and percy come together again. and ollie being so understanding and contacting the malfoy men
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
one quick thing in the beginning of the latest chapter, you wrote "They had decided unanimously that he had to go." referring to dumbledore i assume, but the way the little paragraph makes it a little vague after just naming about 6 different people; you might want to actually name dumbles.

good to see teh weasley men stepping forward to help and fred and george realizing they owe harry an apology. keep up the good work :)
person Leania07
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how crafty and cunning!! I really enjoyed this chapter. A couple of missed letters (I instead of If at one point), but thoroughly enjoyable none the less. I await the next chapter, eagerly!
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding. Now what will Harry do? Go back to school or be home schooled? At least until Ted can help him move past some of his pain