rate_review Reviews

Still enjoy the story plot no mater the name of the race.

Not sure why using 'Draken' is a problem. Several authors have used/are using them. I believe the author has opened up her mythology to others

Wait a minute Drackens are D&D characters......

.... You know.. since the Draken race came from a story challenge someone put up I myself see no reason for you to need to change it.. but maybe thats a wrong idea...

Love The Chapter And CAN"T WAIT For The LuciusxSeverusxRemus. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! =)

This is a very unusual pairing but I like it. This scene was sexy as hell! And you updated not long after I read this previous chapter. That was quick!

Another wonderful chapter, its not a surprise that Charlie is oblivious, the guy is around dragons at the reserve, and apparently his boss is a Draken, and has probably had to shove his Draken instincts down especially if he's a Dominant. So I see who the Submissives are, not just Neville and Harry, but Blaise too, and George of course. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter. ^.^

Leania

Loved this chapter!!!!!!!! George and Viktor....awesome and I can't wait to see what the older trio will do, that should be very interesting.

I've been reading this for some time, and I believe this is my first review. That said, you could use quite a bit of help with spelling and grammar. There was also a mistake in this latest chapter. Septima Vector is female, cannonically speaking. Whenever I write (more like TRY to write) I try to make it seem like it belongs in cannon as much as possible. There's plenty of info out there, so do your homework, and your writing will improve greatly (for one story I wrote over at tthfanfic.org, I actually chronologically lined up BtVS and Charmed so that it'd be more believable).

Love it just like the rest and cant wait to find out who Ron and Ginny's father is. Please Update Soon! =)