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for Revenge of the MHP

by reddragon

person Emily
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i actually like it :)
i hope u add another girl
and i hope u metion harrys well endowed size in the next chapter :D
cant wait for the next chapter
person Emily
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is for Hope..
Ron is a jealous git who used Harry and turns hes back on him not only once but twice.
i really did hate how they made hime braver in the movie. in part 1 right b4 they went in the Ministry of magic
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Power is the aphrodisiac." So true, Hermione. :D
Very descriptive, and bloody. Rightfully so. Can't wait to see what happens to Ron and the Malfoys.
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
first ron save harry life in book one traded his life to let harry get the stone, book 2 went with him to the spider lair, but him out of the way form falling rocks, book 3 stood up to sires who he thought was a mass murder, book 5 risk his life again, book 7 many times.

so yes a man that would die for his friends, and no they did not make him braver, he was brave for all 7 books,

as for a jeasous git, he got into a fight at 14, and 17 under the hucuxx, hermoine said he was haveing it on longer then them, so there.

by the way hermoine went behind harry back 3 year, and fought with him a large part or 6, they all made mistake.. hermoine also attack ron with birds, that was a violent crimeal attack, so why is ron the only bad guy.
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Quite disturbing and well written. Good job, oh harem dragon!
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* This should be interesting to follow...
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ron did nothing wrong, why does he get treated like crap.
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know dear harem dragon... You had me in stitches from the get go.
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok this was bittersweet.. I love the part of Harry being all hot and powerful and having Hermione just drool all over him.. lol. It was hot! And having ron all tied up... hot even more... But all the death stuff... not so hot... Sorry.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such a lusty little tale, and it begs to be continued! Carnal and bloody, and all the good bits in between!