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for Revenge of the MHP

by reddragon

person Lianna
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I finally got around to reading this story and I have to say it's not something that I would usually read but I was quite supprised by how much I enjoyed it. Very well written, a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes but hey who's perfect, right? Very much looking forward to the next chapter. Until then, bye from me x
person dfv
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is just so pathetic
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg please post more! cant wait to see how he got Ginny to submit to Hermione.
person Daye
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have the deepest sympathy for Ron. Who quite rightly points out it doesn't make a lick of sense.

also: 1636,7 byRomeo Stupidest ReCAPTCHA ever?
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As always, Harem Dragon, you do wonderful work!
person pfeil
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, fun. I look forward to leaning more about what happened to Neville, Angela [sic?], the Malfoys, etc -- and to more fun dark Harmony interaction, of course.

Care to move to H/Hr, instead of General?
person bill560682
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can not wait to read more. now with the room of requirements you could fill every one of the listings by having harry bring lily potter back to life so he can have sex with her while granger watches then later joins in. that alone would cover voy, namely granger watching incest being harry and lily and of course harry/lily/granger would cover 3plus. of course you could also involve the creevey brother since they would do ANYTHING for harry potter. an if you do not want harry having sex with the creevey brothers then you can have them have group sex with granger which would cover your 3plus since there would be 4 involved. you could also cover voy, incest, exhib, m/f oral, 3plus by allowing the creevey brothers to watch harry and granger having sex while sucking each other off. as you can see i like the idea of harry/lily and harry and the creevey brothers.
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I gaged when I read that Dumbledore was giving Snape head. But other than that, good work! Hope you continue and I hope you kill Ron really really slowly!
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant!