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awwwwwwwwkwaaaaaaaard. You'd think Voldi would give har something to keep him occupied neh? Was this the last chappie cause it sure didn't feel last chappie ish.

very interesting story, really twisted and kinda wrong as i said in my last review, but it worked for this. it's dark and a really good "what if" AU. it's them trying to make the best of a horrible situation and dealing with it however they can. really good work :)

interesting... just how poisonous is nagini? isn't it rolling the dice some to have her bite Har? Nev doesn't surprise me. I wouldn't want to live in a voldi run world either. why shouldn't har fear. I mean it's not like voldi cares if har hurts emotionally, just as long as he's physically in tact.
I imagine a lot of ppl are going to take that option. really killing off all the mb's is pretty daft. you need wizards to rule and new blood to keep things stable, where else are they going to come from?

I just fucking love you. I want to marry you, have hot steamy sexy multiple times a day, and live happily ever after. That last scene was amazing. Just. Pure gold. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! :( Only one chapter left though? Sadness.
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P.S. I read some of the other comments. I completely get how Harry and Voldemort ended up in bed both times, nothing needed further explanations. I think they really just weren't paying attention, just thought I'd let you know on that front.

Can you please please please update soon with another scene like chapter 3?? *drool* So fucking hot. I had to go back and keep reading that last bit, "I hope you're happy now, you insatiable slut. I have work to do." Best. Line. EVER!!! More pleeeease?? Oh, and I think Harry should be Voldemorts sex slave and have his heir. Just sayin. ;) But I'll be happy with more chapter 3 scenes.
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I didn't think nev would last long but damn that was hella quick. Voldi isn't interested in allowing Har to continue his education? Or an education? I wouldn't have thought that he'd want a stupid or ignorant horcrux but then again, he's rather busy atm. Still, it's a bit of waste.
this story has a rather gloomy depressing feel to it which is understandable considering the situation. even so, i do want to know what happens next.

Interesting- is Harry's behaviour the result of Voldemort's desires, his closer connection with the horcrux inside him, or his own needs/wants? I thought it was the former at first, but the comment at the end of the chapter made me wonder. Anyway, I like how quickly you are updating this story- looking forward to reading more! :D

Interesting chapter, but I like it. : ) Hope you update soon.

that scene of sex was disapointing... not because it was badly written or unrealistic, no; but because they just jumped into the bed so quickly and I was not even prepared for that, it happened so suddenly and with no building of a mood. And thus it made little to no impression on me. Why did Voldemort agreed to it just like that? And Harry? Very out of character, both of them. And so far they seem pretty shallow - I see no depth to any of the characters you presented us with.

It seems to me that you have the story already written and ready for posting; I hope you get better as chapters go.

-SinfulMind

should have figured this would head into bdsm territory. voldi doesn't do vanilla loving relationships. :P
And he didn't want har to start with.