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awesome two chapters for scaled bits and both are good. i found the altercation one interesting seeing it from max's p.o.v. as well as a reflection from his past about his brother and how he was able to pull himself back from a memory of him being hurt before. also from his viewpoint we could see the extent of the damage both harry and amelle were doing to one another and man they weren't holding back for nothing. i was cheering harry on alongside alayla :3 that dracken needed a good roundhouse kick or a smack upside her head i mean being rude and then just being downright nasty are totally different. anyway getting off track. just wanted to let you know stories all awesome and can't wait to read more. btw i know you mentioned it somewhere in your stories but i can't seem to find your facebook page :(

woohooo gotta love your updates, max has always been a favourite of mine,,he's just so strong but vulnerable at the same time , I hope one of my daughters meets a "Max" one day , although hopefully straight LOL

Loved it! Thanks.

squeeeees loudly at the utter cuteness of it all. very nice indeed. This must have been just a bit before har laid the much needed smack down on princess bitch face. Hopefully the little girl's a bit more comfortable now and this will keep har's truce with luc going nicely. Yay for new political alliances. ^^
Oh, yes, pls pls do replace the oh so useless fudge for brains. It's a pity umbitch never got to experience centaur hospitality, but hey, at least har and the rest of the kids didn't have to endure the bitches tortures. that's one scar that will never touch him since she'd be dead before she could so much as lay a pinky digit on him. hmmm, on second thought, by all means, lets put her in the school and let her 'mysteriously disappear' under dracon wrath. mwhahahaha. >> << >>

OH I really liked the last two chapters to this! Yay for parents!! <3

I really liked how you portray James in this. I agree with you that I think having a child would have matured James, that and all the fighting against Voldemort they did after school. This was a great little story.:) I love Rise of the Drackens and these little side stories about the characters are a wonderful addition.:)

oh.... oh.... you just made me cry. I really shouldn't be crying but....It's nice that someone portray James like this. Not to mention I was just thinking about my dad as he passed away long long long ago. meaning....i was 3. so....this was by far the sweetest thing I have ever read and I do not mean in that cavity kind of way. I mean in that....take a picture and treasure that photo for the rest of your life...kind of way.

The sweetness. *gushes ack cavities again. :P *stocks up on toothpaste and has my toothbrush at the ready. Bring on the next installment. ^^

Oh... that is so sweet, it makes me thing of my own dad. And it's nice to see James Potter put into a different light, because we always see how much of an arse he was and could be, but rarely see what made Lily Evans fall in love with him.

Oh so sad but so cute too! more whne yhou can Lol