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Alternate Ending Chapter 35----Thank you for the all-mighty power of Author's Choice and Progative to Revise!!!! [sniffles]

some one said on face book that they hate that harry ignored his crying babies for the ones that died i say i m so happy he did after reading this

sorry not face book on ff

Okay, it's official, not only did I cry in the chapter about the birth, but now I am definitely going to have nightmares tonight about this alternate ending. *sigh* Maybe I won't sleep tonight. Gotta go find a happy fic to offset this horror chapter. Thanks for giving the alternate ending, I can sympathize when something like this happens - the idea gets in the head and no matter what you do, it will not go away until it is written. I have done that with a couple of my writings and it tore me apart to write and then my best friends were shocked that I could write something so horrible. Only one understood what I was going through as she was/is a writer herself. Thanks again for the two looks.

so sad but i like the first ending better I just worry about the last baby...

bout time. she's not only being a prize bitch, but she is being a stupid prize bitch. just cause her mate won't lay a smack down on her, doesn't mean the others wouldn't if given a tiny chance. yeah she's selfish and self centered but if she kept it up she's be learning the hard, possibly permanent way, that she's not.

so good love it want more

damn straight bitch needs to learn she isn't the queen of the fraking universe. Go C!

traumatic inoculation shots... are traumatic. At least he likely won't remember it though so that makes it a bit better.

Poor, poor baby!!! I remember getting most of my shots.. I'm terrified of needles now because of it..