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Thank goodness you did not go with this chapter. It powerful and horrendous. Harry when he came back to his senses would not have been able to live with himself or forgive himself. The final edited and published chapter 53 you did use is more in keeping with the character of Harry that you had in all the prior 52 chapters. But sometimes an author has to explore the deepest, darkest parts of the soul before pulling back and editing towards the grayer areas of humanity. Thank you once again for the chapter that you did ultimately post to the 'Main' story line.

I love the chapter between Max and Ceaser. Are you planning on doing a chapter where Ceaser puts Amelle in her place and 'grow some balls'. as you put it? : ) Or one with some in depth interaction between Harry and Myron and Richard, or Alexander, or Aneirin?

yeah, I'm really, really glad you didn't make this the actual chapter. I'm not sure Harry would have survied the death of 2 of his babies AND finding out that he killed Nasta's brother while feral.

I am sooooo glad you edited I it. Still well written - but very depressing.

I am so glad this wasn't in the actual main storyline. it has the same amazing quality that makes me bow down to you, but i don't think i would've been able to bring myself to read more chapters.

i don't think harry would be able to live with himself after killing saxon. it would kill the overall lightness of the story.

Thankyou for posting it anyway. no matter how disturbing and depressing your mind becomes, it's interesting how the chapter evolved.

Question though... what pissed you off to inspire such a heartbreaking chapter? or is that normal? I can only write such a chapter if i am upset.

*Sanex* why did i put Saxon? *facepalm*

interesting. what made you decide to save them? At least temporarily. i have no doubt the weakest will die if they don't get help soon.

I'm so so so sooooooooo happy you didn't make this the original chapter!!!

I usually don't review in aff (sry!) but I just.. I'm just sooo relieved!!!

I used to read this story in ff and loved it, always checking to see if you had updated. I was sad for a long time cuz you hadn't updated for so long and then one day while searching through some hp fics here, I found this story! And I was so suprised and overjoyed cause this is one of my favorite fanfics and there were a lot of new chapters I hadn't read!

After that I started checking for updates here and was even more suprisingly delighted when you updated so quickly, and regularly too!

I don't know if you put up a notice or not in ff but I'm so glad I found this fic again! :D

Sorry for the long review, It's been building up apparently.

Wow... Im so very glad you changed it.. That almost made me sick..

I am so glad you changed it! I could not bear it if sanex died!! I can't wait for an update on both stories! :)