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person Anon
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter!
The feeling from Max were very detailed. :)

But I would love the view from Nasta also. I think his thoughts about the unusual second mate (in form of Draco and Max) would be really interesting!

Thanks for your hard work (and sorry for my grammar - English isn't my first language...)
person qwerty
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this chapter! Great job doing it from Max's point of view. I loved reading about the meetings from a different perspective. Very interesting!!

Great job!
person Celestialuna
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it from Max's point of view.
person Siekin
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused. I know sanex is human but during chapter 18, when Richard and Max were taliking about Sanex you said he got drunk at a meeting. Are humans from Dracken families allowed to go to mate meeting, or was it a different type of meeting?
person Emma
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite chapter yet!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!! :)
person mnfm
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it, just loooove it!
person Kathy
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love you! Thank you for writing this! I was so excited when I saw this chapter. You are my most fav author ever!
person EasyReader
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I felt so sorry for Nasta. I think this is a great idea to show how the mates lives were changed by meeting Harry and the others. I actually teared up a little thinking of how miserable he was. Are you going to write them in order of dominance?
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This Chapter is amezing. The point of veiw of Max in the courtship
person yngoldfogee
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was interesting to see things from Max's p.o.v. and while it would be nice to see things from others p.o.v's as well you're right in that they would not be as interesting as Max's because he was really put through the wringer emotionally wasn't he?

Love both your stories and look forward to the next update in both of them.