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schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay another Scaled Bits! the main story is fun, but these little side glimpses are utterly fascinating. ^^
Whoa, Maxie really screwed it this time. This going to take serious tome to work out.
Draco learned from the best when it comes to head game dom. ppl forget that sometimes with how he is around Har.
person Angela
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have been a long long long and did I say LONG time reader. I have love your story since the beginning, but I have been a silent reader/somewhat silent on facebook. This chapter and ch. 56 were great. You had me thinking dirty thoughts with Nasta's punishment for Max (would be a good thought). Thanks for making me freak out and keep writing. I will go back to being silent till something make me review again. Good luck with your job!
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so sad this had to happen but so good
person Nicola
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was really emotional, i almost cried for max, i know it was his fault, but it was still really sad :(

It was so well written. i loved it
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I was expecting something more extreme to happen to Max...but this was good!! >:D
person Shadowwolf03
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Man I love these back stories that don't make it into "the Rise of the Drackens". I was wondering what Nasta as the dominant mate would do to straighten out Max on the too hot food issue. Bad Max, Bad. }:-<
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter, I really appreciated the effort and attention to detail used in linking previous events in the original story to this chapter. I have to say that Max is one of my favorite of Harry's mates, second only to Blaise who I remain attached too because he was Harry's first mate :) Thanks for writing and sharing

Harriette
schedule August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is my absolute favorite bit so far i loved the little journey you took us on, and it interesting to see the uncles and then switch back to the birthday party to see them interact there after this. a suggestion for the next bit would be from nasta's dad after helping out with the babies especially on the point of fairy baby. i think one of on the research that has been done on harry's childhood would also be a good one to do. i look forward to reading about the trial.

happy writing
michelle
person thestralhorse
schedule August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is AMAZING!! I have read it twice and I am pretty sure i will read it again later today lol I love max so much he is just so cute!!
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cool, so that's what was going on in Max's Pov~!

Dang, there was one I've always wanted to see in the story...but I forgot what is was...um...OH! I was wondering if you'll do a chapter about the previous submissives that was mentioned in the story, like the ravenclaw in Dumbledore's story and the one Blaise been to and the few that Harry's Mate been to? And a chapter about what happened during Caesar and Amelle's arguement? Please?! :D