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so cute so sixten sound cute and i agree with nasta none of his girls will be like that but i also think it would be cool to see harry around all the dom's that wanted him i 'm looking forward to the meeting that would be awesome to see hanley arsenio meet sixten and how harry will handle being at the meeting with all 6 of his babies happy v day to you to thank you

Aw, poor Nasta! He has no idea that perfection is just around the corner, so to speak. No wonder he's so amazed!

Haha, I am so glad you did this, it was a great idea that was absolutely worth reading. Made me chuckle and the interaction between Nasta and Max was nice to see; I was also glad they had standards enough not to bow to her silly demands.

I like this very much! Thank you!

Will we find out what happened after he left his parent's house?

Whoa, that was pretty intense, wonder what will happen to Ashleigh in later chapters now that she isn't allowed near Harry or the babies~!!! :DDD

And if you don't mind, can you do a SB chapter about the first time Harry went to the Dracken meeting? I want to know what Harry's mates did while he was playing with the kids and wondering around. :DD

Hearing Max version, was more heart wrenching then when I read his mates POV, and I thought that chapter was a heartfelt one, but I guess it's cause this one came from a more personal POV,that had my eyes tearing up.

Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^

Oh, I forgot to ask, but is Ashleigh sick? Maybe have something similar to an early alzheimer's disease?

I'm beginning to hate Ashleigh as much as you do. Now that her "forgetfulness" has shed so much light on her behavior, I'm just really starting to hate her. I have to congratulate you on the subtlety of the hints that you dropped. I've reread the entire thing about 3 or 4 times and I never once got the idea that this would happen. And her reaction when Max was so angry really just set me off. She was so much more upset about not seeing the babies than she was about hurting Harry that way. You have a goft for ensnaring your readers with the emotional content of your writing. Loved it!

Aw this is so sad! I really hope Max and the others forgive Ashleigh, it's just not natural for him to be so angry at her! I just really love the dynamic their family has with Myron and Richard. Thank you!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This was great. I loved Max in this chapter. He's never very serious, but suddenly in this one he is, which just shows how much he loves Harry and the others. I also loved how Ashleigh was begging for Max to not stop her seeing them, instead of just saying Harry. It was obvious she was meaning the babies, if she even included Harry in that at all, or was just thinking only of the babies.

I also can't wait to see what will happen once everyone else finds out about Ashleigh especially Max's grandfather and Amelle and Ceasar. It would be great if suddenly Ceasar took charge and said that Ashleigh was not allowed near Amelle and Eleanora. So that it didn't just go straight back to Amelle refusing everyone and everyone being mad at her. I also like that Amelle is going to have another baby soon.

I'm so looking forward to what will happen next. What will happen to the Dursley's and how Ashleigh is going to act now to, because I can't see her sitting back and taking it. It would be great if she showed up at Harry's door and all of Harry's mates jumped between Harry and the babies to keep Ashleigh from them and then Myron and Richard had to come and drag her back home. Although I would like Myron and Richard to still be involved with Harry and the babies, just keep Ashleigh away. It would also be great if Harry got pregnant again and no one including Max's grandfather would let Ashleigh near him and even throw Ashleigh off his estate.

Anyway just waned to say great chapter.