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person Louise
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. It shows a really tender side to Draco that I don't think about much.
person Emma
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg I loved this chapter! It was such a cute idea!!!!! My favorite part was the family portrait but the entire chapter was amazing! I love how much Draco has grown and matured throughout the story. :) I can't wait til he has his own biological children. ;) anyway, keep up the good work!! :)
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was so cute~!!! :DDDD
person NancyKing
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Star! THIS! This is wonderful! Just because you aren't the biological parent, doesn't mean you aren't a child's parent. My husband has been the one who dealt with my eldest daughter as a one year old with diarrhea, ear infections, being in plays, going to sleepovers and all of the other things that Daddies do as a matter of course. He's not her "bio-dad" (my daughter's term), but he *is* her Daddy. Thank you, thank you for illustrating this so beautifully.

Huzzah for all the men who step up to the plate and become Daddies by choice, not by blood!
person lili_o
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hello

i love your fiction and i'm very addicted to it. you're very talented
will you post a chapter for nasta's point of view (harry's meeting and all)?
I'm sorry for my bad English, i'm french...

if only this story was endless : )
person Seliki
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that you are also writing for the in between parts of the main story line. Draco is such a great daddy and loves those kids soooooo much, I can't wait for more you are great.
person Brenna nah Kerridwen
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just wow....
Thank you for making the point that even if you are not the biological parent of a child you can love them as your own.
Just wonderfully done...

person qwerty
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so cute!!!
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, that was utterly sweet and adorable. Its nice to have a chapter with Draco and the kids, I really love it.
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was soo cute reading about draco and the children. I was smiling the entire time I was reading it.