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schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
could you maybe do a sick harry chapter? I would find it interesting and cute to see Harry trying to deny anything was wrong given the way the dursley's have neglected him when he's ill while his poor mates are attempting to get him to not go to class, and let them take care of him.
person Zeo
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, the adorable! I really, really enjoyed this and despite your worries for awkward gender-neutral sentences, it all sounded pretty great. Hearing the kids speaking and developing real full-blown personalities felt like a real treat and it's nice to know they're all so happy in the future. Thanks for this. :)
person LaffyTaffy
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was just so freaking precious! I loved the future fic and I'm so excited to read the main story and figure out who's who and how it happens! I simply just love this story, I could read it until they're all old and then I'd want to read a fic about their children! Also, I'm pretty sure the chapter about Daddy Draco gave me cavities, it was so sweet! I didn't realize that Draco had such an active role in the parenting and considered all of them his children. I mean, I know he said he did, but that chapter really drove it home and was awesome.
person Patricia
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love all these little moments. I can't wait for the next one.
person Property_Of_A_DeadGirl4-25
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So sweet!
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was nice to get a sneak peak into their future, because while we have been reading the family growing, it is good to know that they are going to a great place, no matter what. I loved the little hints about what madness is about to hit in the main plot line. Good job as always, and definitely not complaining about this fluff "short" story having gotten away from you.
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! I love when the story, or any story, has a family moment that is full of sweet and fluffy moments~!!! :DDDD
person Patricia
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this. A sick Braiden is just so cute! I really love that we get to see a little snap-shot of their future.
person lilly n.g.k
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!loved it!love it!!
so cute-better then i imagend!!and the kids sound adorabul!
cant wait for an updat on ROTD...
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Im guessing Lai is a girl, but that's all I got. I also think its evil of you to set the chapter so far in the future with such spoilers that aren't spoiler but teasers!(nevermind the fact that I enjoyed the look into the family's life after Hogwarts)I hope u update soon and put us poor readers who sit around rereading this story (me) out of our misery! ^_^