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Oh I ADORED 'Sibling Rivalry'!! Loved seeing the grown up kids and their interactions with their siblings.

I've just caught one typo, in the last section, where Braiden is thinking about how his parents tried to "elevate his fears" at going through his transformation, I think you mean "alleviate".

Fantastic chapter, I'm excited to see what other Scaled Bits you have for us in store!

~Spiritxx

You evil writer you! All that build-up and you leave out if Braiden is a Dominant or Submissive! You talked about the scales on his hands but not his wings. You said they were flesh colored, which is not much of a help because it it that he turned out pale like Harry so his white Submissive scales blend in or is it that he is more Blaise's skin tone with a corresponding color scheme? ..... I just keep confusing myself so I'm going to go with my first guess of Braiden being a Submissive.

I think.

You're so good at leaving me hanging!!! Love your stories!!

Oh wow, that was a really sweet chapter ^_^ I can't wait to read more please update chapter 38 soon.

I hate you forever for not telling us the colour of Braiden's wiiiiiiiiiiiings! *rolls around on the floor* But this does bring up a question I've been having... If one of Harry's kids is a submissive, where will they hold the meetings? What about the other kids? Will they know what's going on?

Just so you know, I totally love you and the story and I check at least once a week too see if you have a new chapter <3 not to pressure you at all, I just love your amazing writing style and how detail oriented everything is. :3 If your not gonna be updating Rise for a while though I'll switch to checking here, so would you mind leaving a note to tell me when you feel like working on it again? I fully understand needing to step back and take a break. Take your time, rest and rejuvenate and write what makes you happy <3

I love this the in between parts are wonderful!

Did I miss the part where you say if Braiden is a dominant or
a submissive or did you just not reveal that yet?
Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter:)

I so love your world. When I first started to read your story last week, I thought, maybe it will be finished when I actually reach the end. Now I read the scaled bits too, and I am so happy to know, there is no end near. I also want to thank you for the wonderful story and I hope to read a lot more :) Did you ever write a chapter with Nastas point of view? I so loved Max' story. Again thank you and have a very nice evening.

Bravo can't wait for his first meeting and then we get to see what colors he got for his wings

This was such a lovely chapter. We often get to see through one of the mate's eyes but it is special time indeed as we got great insight into some of the older siblings this time. I really enjoyed learning more about each of the children and how they dealt with each other. Thank you so much for this. I did notice you were mighty sneaky in that you never gave us even a hint as to whether Braiden ended up as a submissive or dominant Dracken. Personally I feel he would make a wonderful submissive Dracken but maybe one day we'll be lucky enough to find out.

~~ Meechy

I LOVED this chapter it was so sweet! I kinda teared up
And yayyy more Fairy babies!!