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First off I would like to commend you on an amazing story thus far. It is an amazing story and I cant wait for you to post more. try not to let yourself get beaten down by harsh reviews, I think the story is turning out wonderfully and I think your portrayal of Snape is highly realistic. Im glad you chose to let him take over gaurdianship of harry. I would like to see more of what harry is learning with tom. I especially liked the old magic scene, from the dementors letting them go by to the sunrise. It was incredible, thats the only way to describe it. I also really enjoy your portrayal of light and dark, I think that it is a concept that very few authors implement correctly, but you have done so beautifully. I would maybe like to see a turning of the tide so to speak, I think that now that harry has a more open mind about magic and life in general I think it would be more beneficial to meet up with the other practitioners of "dark" magic(ex: draco and the others). Im not saying that have to jump right into being best friends but I think that it would add to the realism of the story. I really want to see harry move out of the dursleys for good, and from what I can see it looks like that is the direction your story is taking so Im happy there. I thought that you let harry forgive ron and hermione to easily, They had only been friend for about a couple of years and he is already willing to forgive them for anything? It just seemed forced and I think you should capitalize on the akwardness of their situation in the future. I also really like your ideas about harry's father and his inheritance and the altercation between him and dumbledore. Going back to comment on some of your previous chapters, I also like the idea about the unicorn 'wand', and the black swirls that it gained. It really added depth to the relationship between tom and harry due to the conversation. I love the healing classes and the politics, really interesting idea and not many authors have a healing!harry. I know im kinda boucing around in my review so I apologize for that but I think that the freindship between harry and draco could actually work out now that I really get to thinking about it, He was a total prat in first year, but he probably would have matured, maybe not to the extent that harry has, but he has had some help. Sorry for jumping around so much and for bringing up so much stuff from the past, but this is the first chapter I have reviewed on so I thought you might not mind. Keep up the great and work and please write some more.

i liked the story so far very much and am wondering if there is a way to be notified when you add to it
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michelle

Another wonderful chapter and I'm glad you aren't changing your Snape characterization. I like it the way it is. (and I'd really like to turn Dumbledore into a house elf working for the Dursleys for years and see how he likes it).

Holy... Crap. My hands are shaking from the tension. I was trying to read faster to get to that confrontation. Wow, I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. :)

xoxo,
kitkat

I totally agree with everything that freeze107 has said, exactly what I was thinking, I would aloso like to see harry keeppy hermione around, as I think her intelligence will prove really usefull and she will have more of an open mind that ron. I love your story so much and find yself just dying to know what happens next,you are a brilliant writer and don't let anyone tell you any different, I love snape how he is, as I'm sure a lot more people like him than that one person who didn't, ill be waiting for the next chapter! :D xx x

Another amazing chapter to a phenominal story :) please keep posting asap!!! :D xx x

oh, i din know you were on ff as well. *facepalm. guess i should've though. are you under the same name? *grimaces. I hate looking for a story on ff, searches bring back to many options.
you're blurb at the top makes marv appear almost entirely self centered. Will Marv's emotional attachment to har (provided he has one) carry over to voldi?
Oh, i'm glad the basalisk didn't get killed this time out. He/she (depending on the fic) is such a valuable resource.
I wonder if triton is very different from the others. His name certainly is but then calling him something like Aqua would have been boring.

I am totally enchanted with this story, I love how Harry's training is so very subtle. I look for this story every time I come to adult fanfiction, for this story captivates my imagination and for that I thank you...

god, I love this story, its so captivating! Imm loving it :) I really hope there isn't too long of a wait for the next chapter, I hope we can see more of the basilisk, I think its quite an underated creature in hp and should be seen more :), I also can't wait to see the relationship between harry and develop even further :D I was pleasantly suprised by their encounter, anyways I know whatever you do you'll make it great :D please keep writing :D :D xx

Personally, I don't like Hermione and love stories where things go bad for her so I really loved this chapter. I don't care much for Ron either so when things are bad for both of them, I love it. :)