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This story is so very interesting and I just can't wait for more...I really can't wait for the conflict with Harry and dumbledore to really get going.

Wahoo! I'm so happy to see Harry standing up for what is rightfully his! I wonder if Lupin will re-think what Dumbledore told him now that he has heard Lily say that she didn't want Harry living with the Dursleys. You are writing your Dumbledore so well - whenever he tries to scheme or manipulate Harry and the people around him he infuriates me to no end!! (which is perfect for this!). Hope you had a great Christmas! More Marvolo/Harry please!!!!

Thanks for updating so soon!!!
So sorry to hear about the evil review you got, but please keep in mind that that was only one persons opinion (and clearly it was from someone who couldn

You're a really good writer and I hope to see more updates from you soon! Please don't let negative reviews bother you. I understand how fragile you can feel as a writer posting her work for the first time, but honestly, not everyone is going to love everything you write. That doesn't mean that there's anything wrong with what you've written or with you as a writer. Lots of people, including me, are really loving your writing right now and would be heartbroken if you stopped or even started over. The trick is to always look forward. If you agree with the negative review, do better next time, not for your readers (again, you won't please everyone, no matter what you do) but for yourself. If you don't agree with the review, just forget about it and move forward the way *you* want to. I really like your Snape, and I can't wait to see how him being Harry's guardian is going to work out. :)

Thanks for the new chapter. I appreciate the quick update. I did enjoy seeing what was going on with the secondary characters. But I do have to say please don't let Dumbledore get any of the Potter family money or guardianship of Harry. I also hope Severus just tells Harry about his part with the prophecy getting to Voldemort soon as well. Dumbledore makes my angry (which is a good thing - it means I'm really enjoying your story).

Another amazing chapter! :D it was very clever of you to put this in, I feel as if it added another element to the story, by steering off to what was happening to the other characters and not just harry, and it wasn't to focused on them either, it was just right, I feel bad for severus too, I know it probably wont happen but I'd love for him to fight voldemort, that would be cool :) I hope we do get to see some dueling action that would be good :D keep it up lucky! :P fan fiction high five!! :) x

well damn, I'd hoped after Har's 'pep talk' Remi would grow a pair but I guess it'll take more convincing... if anyone can be bothered. I do hope so as i genuinely like remi despite his being a lamb in a wolf skin. lol, does this mean pettigrew owes too?
I do like the way dumbles was out done. a patronus moments indeed. ^^

I really hope Snape or Harry will get to show Remus that they are not exaggerating for example having Remus talk to Snape about it and Snape showing Remus the memories Harry showed him.

I don't think Remus should go to Harry about the exaggeration thing as Harry's trust in him is fragile as it is and Lupin knows that as such Lupin might not want to ruin it by telling this to Harry's face (basically calling him a liar) however the same can be said the other way around

Oh and please kick the Dursley's out and make it painful

Anyways I just hope Remus does side with Harry or go nuetral in the end because though he is a secondary character in your fic and kind of foolish in this fic I love Remus and Sirius and prefer when they side with Harry

Oh and maybe for the whole Potter family money you should point out some business the Potters own and keep up so if the Potters lost their money they would also have to close down various shops putting people out of work which could cause Dumbledore to double think trying to get the money for various reasons

The more I read this story the more I like it. You've done a really good job keeping the characters true to their nature in the original literature, but also putting your own little spin on them as well. I am really looking forward to where the rest of it will go :)

Yay!!!! Another great chapter in really good story! I love the direction that you are taking with this and can hardly wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work and down with Dumbles!!