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another spectacular chatper, and i was seriously having an on-the-edge-of-my-seat moment with the chase. and i think you pulled off the conversation with sirius really well, after over a decade in essentially solitary surrounded by dementors, he's actually remarkably sane, and i liked sev's take that he had picked up on his animagus' trait of focusing on only one subject at a time (my own dog is easily distracted lol). and remus...i've seen so many different takes on remus' character in fics, yours is just one more. the way you write him -works- for your story, and the fact is, in canon, apparently for 12 years he never even bothered to check on harry, but all of a sudden he's concerned? your take on him works with that and gives his actions a reason. that being said, hope siri's okay, and can't wait for the convo i know is gonna happen between sev and harry when he wakes up after that spectacular little piece of magic lol. and yes, i do think the elementals are just totally adorable and quirky, i can picture them with their own little attitudes and mannerisms. it's funny how little things wind up taking on a life of their own in a story lol keep up the great work, can't wait for more :D

Another great few chapters!! :D. I can't wait to see what happens next I love snape, I think he and harry should be come much closer :D x and yes the sprites are -well in my mind anyway- are incredibly cute I wish I had even one :') I think people just use their imagination to give them life like I did :) anyway keep it up, its great!!! :D x

I would also like to add, that I hope to see more of malvoro and I hope he can teach harry something else new, and I'm still wondering what's going to happen to the basilisk? Will it remain in the chamber? x

Ah! You *have* to update this soon! You have no idea how depressed I was when I went to click the little "Next Chapter" link and it wasn't there. ;.; Keep up the great work. I really enjoy your Remus, actually, and I'm glad to see someone finally calling him on all of his canon bullshit. Sirius is good too, so far. :)

Wow. Just...wow. An amazing story. I love it.
Hope you update soon.

Fantastic chapter! Please update soon!

ooooh, i'm so looking forward to that and the reactions from our little snake in a lions skin. Your right about snape but the man has been pretty much shell shocked, so it's understandable.
I thought the chappie came off very well without Har seeming to Garry Stu... he's still got to work for it a bit, ya know?

Great chapter! I am already looking forward to the next one. I am actually missing Marvolo. I hope he becomes more active once again.

Please update soon!

yay for more story! and another wonderfl chapter, i loved how excited harry was about getting to show off some of his new tricks to someone besides marvolo as well as snape's reaction when he realized he would be one of the only ones to offer him support. loved the comment about hitting harry upside the head for not prioritizing too lol. can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work :D