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schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, first let me offer my condolence on your Grandmother. I have dealt with cancer in my family multiple times, and not always successfully. Now on your writing you are well beyond amateur. Your story was very good and I can't wait to see what is going to happen. Did Harry tell Marvole about Snape reaction to him telling about how he gave lili a choice? What of Marvols feeling on the black fire? When will they find out who his secret friend is?
person Dom
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really loved this story and so pleased you are continuing with a sequel.

I must praise you on your writting. It is beautiful. You have real talent.

So sorry to hear about your Grandmother. I hope you and the family are doing ok and are still managed to have a good xmas and new year.

person Lifvared
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I love your Snape! I love that he can be the same sarcastic bastard but also he cares for Harry. It's really great. You're a very talented writer. Keep on with the good work. Take care!
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really amazed with the awesome political fighting going on with story and I think you are setting a good pace with the flow of the story. And can I say I love this story and look forward to more...
person Anonymous
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person cleo
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Usually I'm not a great fan of this pairing, 'cause usually this kind of stories is totally AU, total dark or a parody, but you have been able to keep up with the books and at the same time altogether changing the result. It's a great thing!
I just hope Severus will find soon the courage to tell Harry his own role in his parents' death, for we all know that he IS NOT a coward and knowing now that Voldemort didn't betrayed his trust maybe make the confession easier.
Hope to read a lot more soon.
person graypheonix85
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, interesting tale so far, and well worth the read. Update again soon, ja ne.
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved that last chapter, everything is so well thought out, I miss marvolo, even though I know that he couldn't fit into the last few chapters haha :) kept it up! I love this amazing story, can't wait for fighting/action :D :D
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yes, remi really stabbed himself in the hand here. So did dumbles. And seriously, couldn't happen to a nicer pair. Remi seriously needs to grow some balls, a lamb in wolfs clothing indeed. Still, i'm glad the old goat is out of the running for harrys guardian. now they just need to get siri cleared so luc can go stuff himself.
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
He really IS a total pussy. I'm not surprised if Siri is completely disgusted with him. willful ignorance in this sort of sitch is SOOOO not cool.
I'm glad siri is being so amenable to suggestion.
I wonder what it was Har did that exhausted him so and will it affect Marvy?