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for Being a Slytherin

by estherkolbe

person Bajagirl
schedule December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I can't wait to see where it goes!
schedule December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update. That was hawt. LOL hope more is to come soon please.
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this new chapter and maybe saying sad was a bit off but this story is really a good, I just feel a little sorry for how lonely Harry seems to be. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
kind of rushed feeling in the beginning though it does feel like it's starting to level off some. interesting start, i look forward to seeing where you go with this
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It is interesting. I hope you update again soon please
person Jan
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the unique twist in the story, and characters... however I feel that you kind of rushed the story a bit... I like how it started with Harry starting his school year at 11, and the time jump 4 years later(nice), but I'm hoping you'll slow it down a bit now that Harry is older?

Though I got to say that I feel sorry for Severus, poor guy is trying to do the decent thing and not gobble up this delicious young man in front of him and you have Harry innocently showing some skin when he moves about ^_^ Hehehe I liked that part.

Keep up the good work, please update chapter 5 soon.

Jan
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the premise of this story. It has a very sweet sort of feel to it and a sort of sad note. I can't wait to read more of this story.