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yup, still here, but I haven't found any way to get updates for stories here, just scrolling through all the ones present, so if you miss it, its wayyyy back through pages.

I have found this story to be really interesting and am eagerly awaiting the next update, please hurry.

Many hugs to you and your plot bunnies,
Sunshine

You made me cry! I am enjoying this story. I hope you can update it soon and we get to see Harry show Malfoy what it really means to be powerful.

Amazing so far!!!! I have read one of your completed stories so I thought I would give this one a shot even though its a WIP. Normally i'm too afraid to read a WIP b/c the author might never finish it but you seem like the author who finishes what they start.
I really love harry and snapes realationship. I also love that harry isn't some king of slytherin but I do wish he would use his slytherin side more so he doesn't get caught by draco's gang again. but it was a great great chapter.
Please Please update soon!

awww, poor harry, of course i'm kinda worried what's going to happen in the morning when a naked harry has to get back to his room from snape's. keep up the good work :)

awww, harry trying to doctor snape. at least snape can know someone cares abotu him

a few spelling issues in the last chapter, but nothing too major, nice to see harry standing up for himself against draco. and sev kissing harry to make him feel better...well among other reasons i'm sure lol. as far as the time jump, nothing sexual had to happen in the beginning, but it was like you mentioned him finding the sorcerer's stone, how? is he still friends with hermione and ron? did he do it alone? just little things like that i think you could have fleshed out a little more or just left out of the story completely. keep up the good work :)

Oh my dear Slytherin god... it is so rare for me to find a "Sweet, caring, and kind to Harry from the beginning" Severus. It is also rare to find Slytherin!Harry where Severus isn't a complete bastard to him. Thank you so much for writing this! I absolutely love it. The beginning left me breathless. The way their eyes met and the instant connection paired with Harry curling up in front of Severus' room's door and the way Severus found him and bought him inside. How he found out about the Dursleys and rescued Harry all of it had me smiling like a fool. I especially love that Severus gave Harry what he denied Draco in that kiss. It was beautifully done and completely believable in the Slytherin way upon which it was done. I can't help but wonder if we'll get Severus' reaction to it all. I can't wait for the next chapter and shall definitely be stalking this story.

Though short, that sure was a spicy chapter ^_^

Go Harry and his first kiss, please update chapter 6 soon.

Jan

awww, snape's feeling all guilty now lol at least harry's taking it well. and snape has his first DE meeting, wonder if harry'll be waiting for him when he gets back. keep up the good work :)