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this story was pretty darn awesome, the only thing I couldn't figure out is except for Harry snagging Wormtail, the others never used their animagus abilities after they spent so much time and effort to get them. seems a bit sad, I would have loved to see them make the most of that talent and have some fun with it.

It was a very well written story, and I'm glad you focused on the story instead of just the smut, (though I am a lover of smutty goodness.) and i think you did very well on this story.

I just finished reading Chapter 2 (3), and I have to say that I really love this story! It'll probably take me a few days to read it, but I'm determined to finish it :) It's not often that you find something so well written; the grammar/spelling is nearly perfect (aside from one or two minor typos), and I love the writing style, there's a perfect blend between objective description and emotive reactions, and a perfect blend of prose and dialogue.

You've kept everyone spectaculary in character, developing them slowly and realistically, so that they are really starting to evolve as individuals in a nice way and in a steady manner. The plot is fascinating as well, I like how you subtly broke away from the book's plot and yet at the same time keep very true to the canon, so that it's almost as if Rowling herself has come up with the plot. It's an amazing AU that keeps to the original series' style, canon and feel.

Excellent job so far! I look forward to reading on :)

Bloody brilient, I wouldnt mind a few little one shots of all the weddings, its sometimes nice to see what people can create for their versions of JKs characters and what they might like in a weeding, Nevile and Lunas would be awesome and I would love to go to that one ;)
and maybe so Potter-Snape brats :D

All in all i loved this story and the whole way you went about it. I wanst at all put of by the only one lemon, lots of little limes in a great plot based story is good enough :)

snape's thoughts on the party and towards albus because of it are just freaking priceless! i could so totally picture the growing look of horror on his face the longer albus described what the party was going to entail. *giggles madly and skips off to read more*

just got finished reading the yule chapter, i actually enjoyed reading the ritual,seeing the reactions of the characters, plus i don't think it hurts to expose people to something they may not otherwise experience. the whole chapter had a lovely warm, fuzzy feeling to it, and you could just picture them sitting around the fire telling stories and eating and laughing and just enjoying the peace and friendship. the kissing wasn't a bad addition either ;) *skips off to read more*

I started reading this by accident, I accidentally clicked the link and thought what the hell. I'm glad I did because I love it. Brilliant way to get rid of Umbridge, I can't wait to see the backlash Fudge gets from putting her in a position over young children. Will the Daily Prophet get a hold of the story? What about the parents? Were any first years ever targeted?
You have a very original and unique plot point with making Draco and Harry teaching assistants and a very good basis to start a Harry/Severus pairing. I hope to see Draco and Harry getting on a bit more in future, no matter how long it may take. I loved the scene where Draco instructed Harry on how to properly brew a potion, using techniques that his Mother taught him as a young child and as for Severus, I hope that he can one day see that Harry is not James Potter, though obviously he will at some point or that would ruin your pairing.

StarLight Massacre.

Great two chapters thus far. I'm really enjoying the interactio between Snape, Harry and Draco.

So I have to say that this story is very good and very interesting so far. I'm really, really super excited to see where it goes! Hoping to read more soon!

oh very nice I love this!

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