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*snort* The Gryffindor-Slytherin Marauders, going 2 generations strong, master chaos crafters. My how ^will^ they market themselves?

Wonderful story --- looking forward to reading more

keep writing as life allows....

Moving along...

so glad to see more of this, actually a lot more, i was really behind. i have to say the idea of harry at full growth and bumbling around as he tries to get used to his new body is quite funny. and i like luc's new girlfriend too lol. one little thing i've noticed as i've been reading both this story and one of your others, you have a tendency to fall back on the phrase "that's for sure/damned sure/certain" a lot, sometimes repeating within a couple paragraphs of each other and sometimes quite a few times in one chapter. it's not bad, and it's one of those little things that you probably don't realize as you work on just one chapter, but when you're reading multiple chapters all at once, it kind of starts to jump out at you. regardless, loving the story and i can't wait to see how things play out next with the fire. keep up the great work :)

I'm glad the horcrux removing spell worked on Nagini without harming her. Excellent update!

Things are picking up...

Ahhhh, another cliffy! You're too good at that, :P! Another wonderful chapter, of course, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Harry, he'll have a big head soon, not from ego, but swelling from hitting so many things! It's something that's too easy to do, heck I still bang my head on the roof *my room is in the attic and my desk is right under the slant, barely 2 inches between my head and the roof*. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more ^.^!

Leania

That was an insane risk Snape! You'll be lucky to get out at all!

Oh no! A cliffhanger! This was not boring.

you're evil.... snape in danger catching the snake... yep... you are evil