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March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 31
I've been re-reading this from the beginning, as I realized I'd forgotten a lot of things from earlier in the story, so new details are catching my eye. One of them relates to Harry's waking up to find out he's undergone a huge magical growth spurt:
"Though shaky and sore, Harry managed to get to the loo with no problem other than needing to lean on Sirius a little. Once in there, Sirius left him alone to do what he needed. Stepping back out, he let Sirius lead him over to the bed and helped him into a robe that wasn't his. That he was grateful for as he was just in some boxers."
I think it would have been quite funny for Harry, while in the loo, to discover a significant growth in one particular part of his body, especially since at that point Sirius hadn't told him what had happened. This is not something I normally do, but I envision it happening something like this:
"Harry breathed a sigh of relief as the bathroom door closed behind him, thankful that Sirius hadn't deemed it necessary to stay with him while he attended to his needs. Yes, he had definitely needed his godfather's assistance to walk from the bed to the loo, something that had him utterly baffled as to why he felt so weak and strange, but privacy while he peed was much appreciated, especially since it was pretty much nonexistent during the school year. Noticing that the toilet bowl seemed a lot farther down than he remembered, he braced himself on the lavatory counter with a hand that was inexplicably shaking, reached into the front of his boxers and pulled his cock free.
"He froze, gaping and wide-eyed. Yes, he was half-hard from the pressure of his full bladder, but even so there was more of him than there should be. At least an inch, maybe more, he estimated, as well as a significant increase in his girth. Not that he had been *tiny* before, but it had been proportionate to his overall build, which of course was short and on the slight side. But now...well, definitely neither one.
"Harry began hesitantly stroking his cock, giving a little hiss under his breath at how good it felt. It had been some time since he'd had a good wank. And although he was definitely responding to the stimulation - his estimale now was at least two inches more in length - this was not the time to indulge, he realized as the trembling in his arms and legs increased. If he continued he was likely to collapse in a heap on the floor, which would bring Sirius running, which would be more than embarrassing with the condition he was in. Not to mention that he still needed to pee. Regretfully he let his erection subside enough so he could take care of that. As he tucked himself away - with one last lingering caress and amazed look - he vowed to make sure he had some private time that night. Or sooner, if possible."
It's rough, of course, but I thought it might bring a smile to some faces. :-D
I've been re-reading this from the beginning, as I realized I'd forgotten a lot of things from earlier in the story, so new details are catching my eye. One of them relates to Harry's waking up to find out he's undergone a huge magical growth spurt:
"Though shaky and sore, Harry managed to get to the loo with no problem other than needing to lean on Sirius a little. Once in there, Sirius left him alone to do what he needed. Stepping back out, he let Sirius lead him over to the bed and helped him into a robe that wasn't his. That he was grateful for as he was just in some boxers."
I think it would have been quite funny for Harry, while in the loo, to discover a significant growth in one particular part of his body, especially since at that point Sirius hadn't told him what had happened. This is not something I normally do, but I envision it happening something like this:
"Harry breathed a sigh of relief as the bathroom door closed behind him, thankful that Sirius hadn't deemed it necessary to stay with him while he attended to his needs. Yes, he had definitely needed his godfather's assistance to walk from the bed to the loo, something that had him utterly baffled as to why he felt so weak and strange, but privacy while he peed was much appreciated, especially since it was pretty much nonexistent during the school year. Noticing that the toilet bowl seemed a lot farther down than he remembered, he braced himself on the lavatory counter with a hand that was inexplicably shaking, reached into the front of his boxers and pulled his cock free.
"He froze, gaping and wide-eyed. Yes, he was half-hard from the pressure of his full bladder, but even so there was more of him than there should be. At least an inch, maybe more, he estimated, as well as a significant increase in his girth. Not that he had been *tiny* before, but it had been proportionate to his overall build, which of course was short and on the slight side. But now...well, definitely neither one.
"Harry began hesitantly stroking his cock, giving a little hiss under his breath at how good it felt. It had been some time since he'd had a good wank. And although he was definitely responding to the stimulation - his estimale now was at least two inches more in length - this was not the time to indulge, he realized as the trembling in his arms and legs increased. If he continued he was likely to collapse in a heap on the floor, which would bring Sirius running, which would be more than embarrassing with the condition he was in. Not to mention that he still needed to pee. Regretfully he let his erection subside enough so he could take care of that. As he tucked himself away - with one last lingering caress and amazed look - he vowed to make sure he had some private time that night. Or sooner, if possible."
It's rough, of course, but I thought it might bring a smile to some faces. :-D
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March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 38
All right, I'm caught up now, to date. Harry has at least recognized his sexuality and is on the way to accepting it. (Can't wait for that conversation with Lucius!) Severus and Lucius are out of "the mess," at least we hope they are, and events are finally starting to move. Good job all around.
All right, I'm caught up now, to date. Harry has at least recognized his sexuality and is on the way to accepting it. (Can't wait for that conversation with Lucius!) Severus and Lucius are out of "the mess," at least we hope they are, and events are finally starting to move. Good job all around.
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March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looks like it's everything is heating up! Excellent update!
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February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i just found this story last night and read straight through (with only a break for sleep) and i love it! thank you so much!
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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Neat.
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January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello again. Reason why i say again is because i am not sure i have replied to any of your other stories. I think i have... but anyhoo... i like this one too and eagerly wait for more.
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January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad to have Harry talk it out with Sirius, hope they don't have too much issue with the removal of the Horcrux. Will Riddle become aware that another Horcrux is gone, or is he to distracted about other things to notice? Another wonderful chapter ^.^!
Leania
Leania
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January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to drop a review and let you know i'm still reading and enjoying this story. I squee just a bit when I receive a notification for a new chapter. I am looking forward to the change in relationship between our boys. I'm still a bit confused with the bonds and Kaliya but after a few more chapters, i'll probably go back and re-read the story all at once to get a better handle on things.
more please!
more please!
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January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was cute!
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January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The Marauders are at it again! Excellent update!