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for Shades of Grey

by SpeedyTomato

person staar
schedule October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow he is attacking where the kids are !!!! so bad....thais for the update and like how the you put in that harry can protect them if they are bonded !!!!! yes that needs to happen can't wait for all their reactions to that !!!!!! thanks an see you soon !!!!!!
person snape_lust
schedule October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the first story i've read where voldemort ordered the children off limits. It shows he still has some reasoning ability left, even if he's totally whacko :-)
person autumngold
schedule October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you left your chapter with such an evil cliffy! I just wonder who Voldemort will take out with his strike on the train. Hopefully his minions listen to him and don't attack the students, but what happens if the students fight back? I'm just glad that Sirius and Remus aren't there. Incredible new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person snape_lust
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to see an update to this story. I was afraid it had been abandoned. I think it's one of my favorites because it doesn't include Sirius in the pairing. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind Sirius, but I like Severus and Lucius more. Plus, this is a very unique story line - both in the war and in their relationship - and I hope to see it continue.
person staar
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love it the snakes trying to get them together !!!!!!!!!! see you soon
person Kat
schedule September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So cute together snakes want them together!!!!
person autumngold
schedule September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter! I hope that soon, with the snakes help, Severus, Lucius and Harry realize they all feel the same about each other. They are missing the perfect opportunity to explore their feelings for each other. Can't wait for more! Thank you for your excellent update!
person staar
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this !!! I have been reading for 2 days and can't wait for more !!!!!!!!! Love the way your doing the story...different good !!!!!
person Maris
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like your stories, but sometimes there is to much talking - somebody says something and then second person repeats this using different words and third paraphrases this once again. You also use word "plenty" too frequently.
person autumngold
schedule August 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter! This story is so sweet, I love the fact that both Harry and Lucius are attracted to each other but to afraid to be honest about it. Maybe they need Severus to help them along? Thank you for your excellent update! Please thank your friend Tenchi for me too! I love all of your stories! Can't wait for more!