rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy reading your fic. The story is refreshing and new, the characters loveable but not to the point of being out of character. An other point I always respect and adore is the slow pacing and development of the threesomes relationship.. which is the reason why I am a tad disappointed with the more recent chapters. I understand the need to wrap up certain scenes in order to move forward with the story but I didn't expect the beginning of Lucius' and Harry's kissing to be done just so.
Nontheless, I can't wait for the new chapter and am waiting impatiently for the coming plot.

Oh good, Severus is starting to let himself get comfortable with the idea. I wonder what the real issue is; something more than just Harry being Lily's son, I'm sure. So they're having more of a waiting game right now, won't last long I bet. With Voldie being a bit more 'unhinged' than the last war, and Dumbledore floundering, I bet the explosives are about to start. Question remains, is Voldie going to go all out manic in his attack, or will there be some surprise planning? As always a wonderful story; sorry I haven't been reviewing lately, quick reads before I try to focus on my own story. (Which I posted, surprisingly enough). Looking forward to your next chapter!

Leania

Yes, Yes, Severus and Harry kissed! That is just wonderful! Along with the relationship of Harry and Lucius progressing, that makes this a fabulous new chapter! Thank goodness both Severus and Lucius are open to the change and progression of their relationship. Hopefully, this will keep them all safe for the end of the war. Excellent update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!

Okay. Big time jump between chap 50 and 51. Need more to process that well. Specially since in 50 snakes are still working on getting the guys to realize they like one another, then suddenly in 51 Luc and Harry have been snogging!

Transition of this part and why Rem and Siri went to Amelia is missing. You mention that they did, and that Fudge is ousted but its a big jump and trouble following it.

Love your work wo want to help when I can. You may also want to look at how characters repeat themselves and each other language wise. Sev talks to simply sometimes... will go back over and get some examples this weekend to help explain better!

I am so glad that Harry, Severus and Lucius' relationship is growing stronger. Hopefully soon Severus will get over his insecurities and realize Harry and Lucius really care for him. If they bond, will that protect them from Dumbledore and his crazy ideas? They need all of the help they can to escape his manipulations. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!

yep i say that they are to gang up on Snape and get him going .... thanks for the update !!!!!

I am so glad that Sirius and Remus found another horcrux! I am even happier that they aren't telling Dumbledore. I can just imagine the questions he would ask them. If they aren't carefull, Harry could end up back in his manipulative old hands. Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!

so good that they found another one ....that's 3 gone so good !!!! I love that the snakes are the ones that are trying to get them together so funny ..thanks for the update !!!!!!

Excellent new chapter! I am so glad that none of the students were injured in Voldemort's attack. At least this way Harry doesn't have to feel guilty. I have a feeling if Harry had been returning to school Voldemort would have captured or killed him. Thank you for your wonderful update! Can't wait to find out what you have planned for Harry, Lucius and Severus next!

thanks for the update but man it was so short !!!!!!!!!!!!so the war has started...Black & Lupin should get out man .....see you soon !!!!!!!