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May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it! :) I'm not sure what else to say. The story is really good and interesting so far and I can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
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May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic and I can't wait for more, the characters are spot on.
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April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, if that isn;t the sewage icing on the crap cake. The idea was good, they just hadn't counted on the whole horcrux scar thing. I hope they stick with har though, someones got to cause dumble's sure ain't, the manipulative old goat. Lily and james would have strung him up for this. He's banking a hell'va lot on something har doesn't even remember. seriously, if that's the way your 'allies' treat you, going gray maybe the best thing har ever did. Snape may have an ally in siri... if he can get him to sit and listen for long enough anyway. Siri's a bit excitable.
That's one thing i don't understand about abusers, they seem to forget that those they're abusing grow to a size where they can fight back, sooner or later. especially since this on can use magic... and they KNEW his own kind would be back for him. seriously, how stupid can you get but then neither vernon nor duddikins are the brightest globes on the shelf and the silly cow would rather live in willful ignorance. sigh, emotions can cloud even the brightest of minds, which those three aint.
anywho, good stuff and keep it up. ^^
That's one thing i don't understand about abusers, they seem to forget that those they're abusing grow to a size where they can fight back, sooner or later. especially since this on can use magic... and they KNEW his own kind would be back for him. seriously, how stupid can you get but then neither vernon nor duddikins are the brightest globes on the shelf and the silly cow would rather live in willful ignorance. sigh, emotions can cloud even the brightest of minds, which those three aint.
anywho, good stuff and keep it up. ^^
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April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, just found this and I love it so far! You have some very creative ideas and I can't wait to see where this goes.
But I have to admit that while I'm notoriously bad at making the effort to drop a note, you using my 3rd favorite Ron line in POA made me HAVE to write and give you kudos! 'Pig with hair'.... hahaha.... I say that all the time to my furry Lab clients-- most affectionately, of course, just cuz they're so smart and LOVE food; they are closest to my heart(work and train with all breeds of dogs currently.)
Anyway, I love how you are weaving canon stuff in and making the "third" faction in the war so plausible. Really, this is such a good and original idea! You're making some sense of a VERY complex dynamic! Also, your handling of political and personal agendas-- 'looking at the situation from all angles, including through.' (to quote Robert Hunter) is amazing. And the excellent execution (writing/typing/not going with spell-check mistakes made by homophones or wildly wrong auto-corrects) makes it all the more noteworthy :) Seriously, your attention to detail and good grammar are very much appreciated.
But I have to admit that while I'm notoriously bad at making the effort to drop a note, you using my 3rd favorite Ron line in POA made me HAVE to write and give you kudos! 'Pig with hair'.... hahaha.... I say that all the time to my furry Lab clients-- most affectionately, of course, just cuz they're so smart and LOVE food; they are closest to my heart(work and train with all breeds of dogs currently.)
Anyway, I love how you are weaving canon stuff in and making the "third" faction in the war so plausible. Really, this is such a good and original idea! You're making some sense of a VERY complex dynamic! Also, your handling of political and personal agendas-- 'looking at the situation from all angles, including through.' (to quote Robert Hunter) is amazing. And the excellent execution (writing/typing/not going with spell-check mistakes made by homophones or wildly wrong auto-corrects) makes it all the more noteworthy :) Seriously, your attention to detail and good grammar are very much appreciated.
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April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is thought provoking and interesting. Thank you for writing it.
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March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh another chapter, its getting interesting. Poor Sev doesn't realize the amount of 'hopping' he'll be doing; its going to be much more than before. I wonder who this mysterious person is, but of course you know ;) Good job so far, and I await the next chapter!
Leania
Leania
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March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far! Definitely one of the more interesting stories I've come across and I love your portrayal of Severus, Lucius, and Harry! Can't wait to read more :)
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March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
because he's harry freakin potter and nothing ever runs to plan involving him. :P
Still, har's horcrux seems especially active in this fic, i wonder what they plan to do about it.
Still, har's horcrux seems especially active in this fic, i wonder what they plan to do about it.
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and can't wait to read more
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January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh interesting, can't wait to read more. So that cut on Harry's arm, in the book its more in the shape of the Dark Mark then just a slice like they had in the movie? A little confusing, since I haven't read the books yet, but that's what I gathered. Overall well written and very intriguing; I await the next chapter!
Leania
Leania