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October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 54
I'm re-reading this from the beginning because I'd forgotten too many details. This has to be one of the longest, most drawn-out consummations of any of your stories. *g*
Something occurred to me. A couple of chapters earlier, Amelia Bones was lambasting Dumbledore for not sharing information with the Ministry, specifically, in this case, about the Horcruxes, I think, but really who was he supposed to tell? Fudge would have laughed him out of the building, assuming he didn't try to have him arrested.
~Debbie
I'm re-reading this from the beginning because I'd forgotten too many details. This has to be one of the longest, most drawn-out consummations of any of your stories. *g*
Something occurred to me. A couple of chapters earlier, Amelia Bones was lambasting Dumbledore for not sharing information with the Ministry, specifically, in this case, about the Horcruxes, I think, but really who was he supposed to tell? Fudge would have laughed him out of the building, assuming he didn't try to have him arrested.
~Debbie
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October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 57
No sex even though they're bonded now? Hmm. We'll see how well that resolution holds up when they're all having erotic dreams, are sleeping in the same bed, and waking up with hard-ons. ;-) Good chapter.
I just saw this typo from my first review of Chapter 54:
" . . .It derives from the difficulty in extracting the meat from wrinkles, a type of edible snail."
Stupid auto-correct! Obviously that should have been "winkles," not wrinkles
No sex even though they're bonded now? Hmm. We'll see how well that resolution holds up when they're all having erotic dreams, are sleeping in the same bed, and waking up with hard-ons. ;-) Good chapter.
I just saw this typo from my first review of Chapter 54:
" . . .It derives from the difficulty in extracting the meat from wrinkles, a type of edible snail."
Stupid auto-correct! Obviously that should have been "winkles," not wrinkles
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October 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!!!! at least now one problem out of the way for them good !!!!!
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October 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous new chapter! Thank you for having Severus, Lucius and Harry bond! Hopefully this will keep Harry safe from Dumbledore and all of the other people who want to use him. Even better is that it will keep Severus and Lucius safe. Thank you for your excellent update! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
These are the most aware and involved snakes ever. LOL. I have to wonder, even with the foreshadowing of marriage bonds protecting Harry from testifying, wouldn't the DMLE still be able to question both men directly under Veritaserum if they have cause to believe they kidnapped Harry? Or would it happen that Harry could say he ran away and met up with them...or something....and nobody could question him under Veritaserum, so there would be no justification for questioning the other two because they couldn't bring charges?
If Sirius has legal guardianship he could always say he approved Harry hiding away, so there is also no fuss about them keeping an underage wizard away from his guardian. Sure, everyone will be pissed, but if he says it was to remove the horcrux and stop Albus' machinations, I could see Sirius pulling that off.
If Sirius has legal guardianship he could always say he approved Harry hiding away, so there is also no fuss about them keeping an underage wizard away from his guardian. Sure, everyone will be pissed, but if he says it was to remove the horcrux and stop Albus' machinations, I could see Sirius pulling that off.
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August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually kind of disappointed with the time jump and *hand wave* that now they are all kissing and moving the relationship along. I would have liked to have read the scene where Lucius admits to the attraction, and see how Severus got pulled in to actually say anything.
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August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm torn. It seems like Harry needs to be pulled in for the dramatic confrontation -- at the very least to explain to Albus the horcrux is no more and to let them tell him off before he dies. However, I don't really want to see him manipulated into it. If the trio decide they want to be there at the Hogwarts battle -- under polyjuice maybe for the older two since they can be recognized -- to protect the school they love, and the kids, that makes slightly more sense. Or if there is some additional strength they get from the bond that leads them to fight....just anything besides Albus getting his way. :)
Of course, there hardly seems to be time to get bonded, make plans, etc. before Hogsmeade weekend. LOL
The acknowledgement of kidnapping...are they just going to say Death Eaters took him and Lucius and Severus rescued him? Phrased correctly, those will sound like two different things. :)
Of course, there hardly seems to be time to get bonded, make plans, etc. before Hogsmeade weekend. LOL
The acknowledgement of kidnapping...are they just going to say Death Eaters took him and Lucius and Severus rescued him? Phrased correctly, those will sound like two different things. :)
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August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely fantastic. I love your writing style and who you ship. Please update soon I can't wait to read more.
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August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
after everything that has happened Dubbledork still has it that he needs Harry for it ! man o man dumb ass that he is .....happey that Amelia understood everything Black and :upon had to say...and that Harry is safe and needs to stay away !!!!! wow a lot happened here , so good !!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!! really enjoy all of your work !!! :):)):)
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August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous new chapter! Dumbledore scares me, however. He is such a horrible man to be planning Harry's death for his greater good. If he tells others about Harry being a horcrux, they might kill him thinking they would be stopping Voldemort. After all, Dumbledore's minions worship his word just as much as Voldemort's do his. Excellent update! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Harry, Severus and Lucius next!