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luc would have made a wonderful teacher or a tutor.

well, crap! That bodes extremely bad things of utter badness. are these regular Ds or ones that have been modified some how? i mean, dammit, those things are feckin creepy enough as is!

hopefully thats drake and cissa safely away and har is getting on okay with luc and thats good to, yeah? *tries to look hopeful.

why is it all magical modes of transport either dump a noob on their arse or make em lose their lunch?

if har was still trapped with the dursleys would the blood wards have kept the evil beasties out?

so delores' dementors found harry, good thing luc was there to get them out, even if it was ahead of schedule. and i feel so bad for luc, it's obvious he's upset about losing his wife and son the way he is, and now not even getting to tell them a real goodbye. i did like harry's little learning session about the wards, hopefully it's a first step in him realizing all the stuff he's been missing out on beccause of the way dumbles has been controlling things and realizing that sev and luc really do have a lot they can teach him. keep up the great work :D

ohhh, love it! harry's finally willing to listen at least a little and luc is learning that harry's smarter than he first believed, now maybe things will start smoothing out between them all. keep up the great work!

I haven't read this in awhile, nice for you to get back in the swing of things.Or maybe it's me...

I really like the style that you've written this fanfic in - whilst it doesn't feel quite as personal as most fanfics, it's a lot closer to how the books themselves are written and it flows really nicely. Sincerely looking forward to every chapter you publish from here on out!

The newest chapter is good. Could you have Lucius and Harry conspire together to play a prank on Severus, to break the monotony?

well, that's hopeful. the start of an alliance at least and with all the crap that's been hurled at har over his short life its nice that someone will finally watch his back, even if self interest is still one of the main motivators. Ron and mio did their best, but they're just kids. They don't have the knowledge to handle this or the experience. Sev and luc do.

yay update! ^^

Poor Har, this chappie was all about him learning just how far up sewage creek in his hole riddled boat he is, with dumbles standing on the bank, using a long pole to shove him towards that waterfall and smack the ores out of his hands when he manages to improvise one.

He's lucky that sev and luc are willing to come in from the other shore, throw him tow rope to bring him out of the creek and mean time provide him with more ores and a boat patching kit.

If I was har I'd be panicky as well. It's like the mental ick factor of thinking about those bugs that lay their eggs under the skin. Just thinking about it has you cringing and mentally screaming 'get them out! get them OUT! GET THEM OUT!'

looking forward to next chappie.

absolutely loving this story. I was wary at first as i hate the 'bad severus' stories. but this is coming out fantastically. Please update soon :)

Wow, I mean, wow! That blow up was a llllloooonnnngggg time in the making! I actually got a little teary eyed from reading it, you could feel the emotion. Seriously, how could anyone expect an orphaned boy who was treated like crap by 'family', then every other adult around him, to be on the good 'light' side and not spiral into darkness and madness. Well this might just be the opening Sev and Luc were looking for; and I know Harry feels loads better after getting that off his chest. I can't wait to see what you have planned next, and truthfully taking Harry to his parent's graves should be the first step towards building trust. Perhaps a little more truth and openness on their side will help too. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next!

Leania