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June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, we're talking about bonds and we know that those ALWAYS have a different reaction than the one intended. I mean, really, as close as those three are getting? I want one of those ducks too!
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May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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Wow, this just gets more complicated with every new chapter! That isn't a criticism, btw. I like that Kaliya is taking a more active role in trying to help Harry. Should be interesting to see what happens with Nagini.
One correction: you said Dumbledore "hordes" information. Should be "hoards."
Wow, this just gets more complicated with every new chapter! That isn't a criticism, btw. I like that Kaliya is taking a more active role in trying to help Harry. Should be interesting to see what happens with Nagini.
One correction: you said Dumbledore "hordes" information. Should be "hoards."
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May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVE all your stories! I hesitate to say anything, because I just want a clarification, but I don't want to seem ignorant of new language trends. What's with the excessive use of the word 'assist' as a noun?
Whenever I see your name on a story, I know it's going to be rich in detail and plot twists. Thank you so much for sharing your gift here!
Whenever I see your name on a story, I know it's going to be rich in detail and plot twists. Thank you so much for sharing your gift here!
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May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awww, all the boys are playing well together lol. and kaliya's coming in more and more handy. loving the story, keep up the great work :)
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May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Took me two days to read, but it was good. It does sound like a good plan-both of them.
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May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awww, loved all the conversations between the adults and how much they obviously all care about harry in their own ways. loving the story, keep up the great work :D
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the part where Padfoot almost gave Lucius a heart-attack. I also like the story about how Sirius, in his Padfoot form, used to curl-up with Harry in his crib, and Lily would threaten him every-time. Excellent update!
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May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've read through chapter 20 and have to say it's a great story. I have no idea in what direction you will be taking this and look forward to seeing it happen. Thank you for writing this story.
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May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I 'm surprised you don't have more reviews. Well, the hits do say great things.
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May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely little heart to heart between the four; clearing the air as best they can. I love how Sirius scared the hell out of Lucius by just being Padfoot. At least he didn't scream; and the possibility of someone learning Parseltongue, interesting. I suppose it should be possible, since anyone can learn any spoken language with enough determination, someone to assist, and a reason. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
Leania
Leania