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for Shades of Grey

by SpeedyTomato

person ChaosLady
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Albus is finally doing something that Sirius has wanted for a long time. Too bad it took some very sneaky tactics on Sirius part to get Albus off his ass.
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
the stuffed dog as an assignment is clever... I quite like it. Pettigrew better watch out... everyone is going to be looking for him lol.
person Sara
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person LadyFireCrab
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chappie.....................this story just keeps me wondering what's going to happen next.
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is one of those stories that by necessity cannot always be exciting and yet you do manage to put something in to capture the interest. In other words, love the duck! Oh, and you have an extra sentence right before the last sentence of the chapter. Looks like you combined two sentences into one and the copy of the first part didn't get taken out.
person ChaosLady
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry's duck sounds hysterical!
person Leania07
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Going good so far, and I'm really loving that duck! It's about time someone expressed concern (other than Lucius) about Severus' welfare; poor man is balanced on a thin wire as it is! Keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying this so far!

Leania
person quaff
schedule June 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I'm so glad that Sirius and Remus are involved now.
person LadyFireCrab
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I like where this is going and can't wait to see what happens next.
person ChaosLady
schedule June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! More charmed ducks! *grins*