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by SpeedyTomato

person Leania07
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh is this an indication of things to come? Or am I reading into this too much? Which ever it is, another wonderful chapter. One slip up, when discussing the sack to put Nagini in, you put "...here" instead of "her", sentence below:

person BAFan
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 29

Uh-oh. What's going on with Harry and those inflamed joints?
person ChaosLady
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update! I wonder what's wrong with Harry?
person Genuka
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, that heat in his joints bothers me. Yes, it could be repair work going on but I'm not so sure of that. I hope that one of the others takes a look at it soonish.
person psychosmurf
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4: Anyone else wanna punch Snape in the nose with his constant name calling?
person psychosmurf
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ch 5 At least Snape realizes how much of a wanker he's been. Vernon et al deserves to pay for all they've done and not done. Dumbledore too. hmm bound magic....interesting
person psychosmurf
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ch 6 Hope they start to treat Harry a little better now
person Johanni93
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with Shades of Grey! I came across this amazing story coincidentally and I'm so glad I did! I 've been hooked since the first chapter. How I managed to stop myself from reading on for a moment and review I don't really know. This is my first time reviewing on this page by the way, xD. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you for writing such a brilliant fic! You made my day! Hope you have a great week! *moves happily onto the next chapter*
Cheers!
person ChaosLady
schedule August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update! I'm glad the bonding went as planned. Severus and Lucius choose a good birthday gift for Harry.
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I am looking forward to the next chapter!