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for Shades of Grey

by SpeedyTomato

person Leania07
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, so now Harry is...hairy...*giggle snort* sorry, bad pun I know...probably not the only one either to have said that. Just too tempting. Anyway, so Harry is now taller than Severus, oh that doesn't happen often; I always thought of Severus as being 6'2" or something and Lucius as 5'9" or so. Keep up the good work, I'm enjoying it as always. ^.^

Leania
person Genuka
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
glad everything is working out and that Harry's okay
person ChaosLady
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Harry woke up and that his magic is making up for the Dursley's neglect. Wonderful update!
schedule October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story I so love it keep up the awesome work
person Genuka
schedule October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're a wonderful writer and I understood perfectly that you were creating a build-up. Besides I didn't see anything that could be called a filler. They were all integral to the story line.
person Leania07
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*giggle snort* Your A/N at the end, too funny! So Harry's hitting his growth spurt, and like most things for him, it's not a normal, gradual thing. Probably best that he's "out of it" during this process; magical or medical coma (Draught of Living Death for perhaps?). Not your average growing pains, poor thing; at least he has the best minds on his side. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for more!!

Leania
person easyreader
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh great and terrible Psychofruit.....great chapter. I figured that something was going to happen after the bonding but not this. I like how they have all put aside everything and focused on Harry exclusively. Thought for sure Sirius was going to start blaming Sev and Luc for Harry's condition. Can't wait to read Harry's reaction to waking up taller :)
person TheMysticalDragon
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The dreaded Cliffie!! *beats the author with a pillow* Update soon! Loving the story so far!
person ChaosLady
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Update soon!
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First time i read deatheaters finfing out the connection is part of the dark lord. That was a very good idea i will follow this story as i really liked it.