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for Savior Unwound

by Camorgan

person staar
schedule January 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG so good MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person samara
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please continue
person SnarryLover91
schedule March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I've loved reading it. Please update as soon as you can and keep up the good work.
person Cathrine
schedule June 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love it. Your story is marvellous. I love everything about it. Plot is good, characters are superb and sex is hot xD. I didn't find the flashbacks confusing at all but sometimes and only sometimes I'm not sure who says what but after few sentences it becomes clear. As I said your characters are simply great - Harry is cute, witty, submissive but only in bed and of course deliciously erotic! At the same time Voldemort is perfect just the way I like him. In the end these factors make your story one of my most favourite. I will be waiting for an update.
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i'm still absolutely loving this. i can hardly wait for more.
heh, we all knew it wouldn't be long before paddy caved. ^^ this is where he's meant to be after all.
person emma elizabeth pressnell
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow it is just BRILLANT !!!!!!!
person queen reader
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the a/n at the end of the chapter. I was a bit surprised that you chose to print the flashbacks and timeframes without any identifying markings or indications. I don't know about anyone else, but for myself, they are a bit confusing and I don't really understand what you are going for with that technique.

Please understand, it is not my intention to be insulting or rude and I hope that I'm not. If you feel that I am, then I truly apologize. But, remember, you did ask.

As confused as I sometimes get (All confusion NOT being caused by your story), fiction is a way for me to relax my mind and enjoy a good story without having to work my brain too hard. If it's too confusing, I just get frustrated and end up giving up the story altogether. The truth is I don't have a lot of time left and I'm not willing to spend it confused and unhappy. I'm not ready to give your story up just yet; so I'm going to keep reading and hope I manage to get unconfused soon.

Oh! By the way, I really like the story. I hope I mentioned that before, but if I didn't, there it is.
person BAFan
schedule February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6 - Whew! That was...whew! I'm really enjoying this story. I've read other fics where Voldemort kidnaps Harry or Harry joins with him for whatever reason, but this one is quite different. The flashbacks aren't at all confusing; don't understand why people are having a problem with them. Dumbledore is rather chillingly fanatical regarding Harry's ultimate martyrdom, isn't he?

Looking forward to the next update.
person Jan
schedule February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is enticingly hot!!! Love it!

Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^
person savannah19742001
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the flash backs give much needed background especially needed for Siri and Sev. A rare but brilliant pairing but without the background they would be sort of one dimensional. I really like that you are developing their characters. Can't wait for more...