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for Malfoy's Hidden Pain

by LadyReadsalot

person Cat
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Im intreagued to see where you take this, that seems like alot of intense emotions for Hermione to feel out of what seems like nowhere but it seems like it cold be great.
person Lani
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you got me! Awesome, can't wait to hear what happens in the next chapter!
person Chester
schedule April 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really like where this is goIng - all I ask is for a happy ending please. I can see this story evolving over a large amount of chapters - looking forward to it. Glad to know that you are doing better.
schedule April 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good chapter, except you kept calling Lucius, Luscious. There were a few other mistakes but that's the one that stuck out.
person Citten
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story so far! i do hope that you have lots planned & that you will give us a little more back story on some things but just dont end it here! so please post soon!
person Samibear
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way this is going, I just wish there were more :)
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I glad Draco is not dead. This is going to be good, I can tell.
person heartstar
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more please love this
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Welcome ^^ Also, good chapter. I want to jump in their and strangle Draco's parents lol XD
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, but you spelled Professor Snape's name wrong the entire time. It's Snape. Not Snap. Look forward to reading more though.