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Great beginning to your story. I am completely hooked. I wonder why Harry is losing his magic, and why Hermione loses hers. It will be interesting to see how Todd reacts to finding out about the magical community. I hope Hermione does that before the wedding. I can't wait till your next update.

I am fascinated. So...Todd is some sort of reincarnation of Voldemort and the Death Eaters haven't been wiped out.....and Todd/Voldemort is stealing magic to regain power? I have no idea. But I cannot wait to read more! You must update soon. Please :)

Bravissima!

I almost forgot, but this made me very, very suspicious.

"it wasn't exactly the first time she had touched his hair, so she had no idea why he was opposing to it this time.

He leaned forward again until their noses were almost touching. "You belong to me." ... Just as she was coming back down from her climax, a victorious smirk spread over his face and he looked at her once again. Lust had already made his eyes blacker than usual, and wild glee darkened it even further.

She had no idea why he seemed so overjoyed,"

Yep, I'm definitely very, very suspicious of that bit. It was hot, but definitely suspicious all things considering. XD

I love your story Somewhere in Time because I think you capture the Hermione/Voldemort relationship so well while staying true to the characters. I'm really excited to see how this story plays out as well - but I can't imagine Hermione without her magic!!! Can't wait for more!

Yaaaay! Read the first chapter and am really liking this story! There is such a fast speed in this chapter, but since this will be so short, that's understandable. For some strange reason, I can relate to that Paulina Marcus... killing Death Eaters, working as an Unspeakable... yes, doesn't sound bad at all ;) Does she also have a handsome werewolf lover sleeping in her bed, perhaps? I mean, she obviously can't have the Dark Lord since he is all busy between Hermione's legs. Booooo.

But great sex-scene! For some reason, I just loved this sentence: "whenever her pussy clenched in excitement around his manhood". I don't know really why, but that picture just felt so spot on! More of that, please!

Also, very intrigued to find out what this loss of magic is about. Does "Todd" have something to do with it, perhaps? Or is it something else that "Todd" will have to help with?

Nah, for some reason, I think it's Todd that's behind it. I wonder why ;)

Oh, and don't you just love pleasing our Queen? Marrying Ron of to her. Hehe. So THIS is why you got sent those masseuses-guys instead of me? How unfair.

Anyway, looking forward to the rest of this story! Good luck with the writing!

Oh thank you for the lovely birthday gift, dear. I loved it. *smooches Serp like crazy*

Todd Lammor - someone has been playing with letters again. That man has too much spare time on his hands. *sniggers*

I really liked how you portrayed Harry and Ginny's interactions and how you handled the divorce between Ron and Hermione. It's so realistic, especially the part about him getting remarried so soon. That often happens. I also liked how you kept the whole "who's to blame" part out of that.

Now back to the important parts of this chapter: "Todd". So, he's tall, dark and handsome but doesn't look like Tom Riddle. I was waiting for Harry and Ginny to freak out upon seeing him or Todd having some kind of excuse not to be there, but you took a different route. I am wondering how he looks now: we'll decide on Ben Barnes from Dorian Gray then. It's my (and Miya's) birthday gift after all and I am suuuuure you don't mind imagining that. XDDDD

Loved the smut. *drools, stabs voodoo doll*

I also loved how you described how she finally had found someone to let go with. That she was always in control with Ron and now the roles were reversed. And of course, we always enjoy how he goes all possessive on her and claims her. I also noticed several times that he "reacted" to Hermione's "private thoughts". He clearly loves playing with his food too much. You're supposed to be a snake, Tom er... Todd, not a cat. Hermione's the catperson. XDDDD

And I am really intrigued with the whole loss of magic and how he's achieving that. I like how you build up towards that by using LV's theory of Muggle-borns stealing magic in canon. It gives it a nice connection to JKR's magical theorem.

Turning them into Muggles: Talk about the ultimate revenge. Nicely vicious, "Todd".

I also found it well-described how you approached the problem and relief it could be for Hermione to date a "Muggle". And how paranoid she'd become about handsome blokes thanks to Voldemort. *snnnrks* Not paranoid enough, dearest.

I am wondering how it's going to end up for Hermione though. Since he seems to be claiming her, it could become very uncomfortable for her once she realises who he truly is and what he's done when she can no longer defend herself magically. Talk about being stuck then. Ouch. *wonders if our voodoo dolls are finally starting to work or if Serp decided: Screw the HG Voodoo Dolls (registred trademark), I'll get her myself. XDDD

OK, so this was a jump from one subject to the next review as my brain is prone to function.

Thanks for the cameo there, dearest. Next chapter: How Healer Nerys cleverly disarms Hermione and takes her place. Muahahahhaa! Okay, I know... but it's for my birthday. *bats eyelashes*

BTW. another thanks for "Paulina" for sending Hermione to me. Nice work, Mi-Paulina.

So, I take it Verity as in V was our beloved queen finally getting married to her soul mate. And poor Shannon is stuck being a Muggle sister to Hermione, but she did get a glimpse of Todd, which the birthday girls didn't get. PAULINA, we are displeased about that, right? ;) Besides, Shannie already has Sirius and Alphard in her basement so we're thinking she's getting a bit too much fun. XDDDD Oh, yes, Serp, I'm sooooo getting my revenge by nagging about the cameos. *ROFLMAO*

Anyway, lovely chapter dear. I'm looking forward to the rest of your "short" story, which I recall was supposed to be a one-shot and then three chapters and now I read four-five, but eh... just mock me ... on my birthday, which happens to be the sixth of December but okay, it was the sixth where you were. ;)

Did I say already that I loved the smut and Todd? loved it.

More more more more more more more more....

Yep, I'm procrastinating in finishing chapter 12 of prisoner now. Okay, I'll stop reviewing and finish that. Talk to you later,

xx Nerys

who loved it. Thanks dear.

Harry and Herms lost their magic? Oh, no's!!!! Oh, and they're around 27. Good to know.
Great. No Romione. (Well, that's why it says Hermione/Voldemort, I can get so stupid sometimes)
""You mean the one about Hermione returning home and finding Ron with four different witches? Or the one with Ron catching Hermione with another witch in her office snogging?"" Why the hell does the thought not disturb me? I'm not exactly a great fan of slash fics and it normally would disturb me... Probably my plot bunny that wanted me to make an OC&OC HP-fanfiction where one of them is Bi... -.- I mean, M/M isn't as disturbing for me in the fic world as F/F, and it's not because I have anything against... all right, now I'm blabbering, on with the fic!!
Aww, it's so nice to see them be cool around each other :D Not your typical Hermione/Ron-divorce fic. Great! Well done! *claps*
Wait a minute? Ron married so quickly? O.o
I liked that Hermione have a younger sister. J.K. did after all say that she wanted her to have a younger sister, who was a Muggle, but didn't know how she could mention her - until it was too late.

"She had never seen anyone as handsome as the young man standing next to the chair beside her. "Breathtakingly handsome" was the first description that came to her mind and literally so, since she felt her breath catch the moment her eyes took in his features. Hermione could already imagine that amount of girls that would've followed him around if he had attended Hogwarts." Hmm, something about this breathtakingly handsome young man has just caused butterflies to move around in my stomach. "Drool" indeed, Hermione.

""Ah," he murmured with a nod. "No wonder I've never had the pleasure of meeting you before."" Please! He's KILLING ME!!!!
Todd Lammor? There is not ONE letter in that name that goes out of "Tom Marvolo Riddle".

"She decided to blame it completely on him. It should be illegal to be this handsome, intelligent, clever, and witty. It should be illegal to be this

J'adore!

HEALER NERYS!

This story, you have no idea, makes me so excited. I literally flailed when I saw you posted the first chapter of a new 'short' story. (We'll see ;P)

Well, I think it's kind of obvious who Todd is, with all that possessiveness and the drawn out s's. xD

I am curious to know about the magic thing. It sounds scary, losing or being blocked from a part of yourself.

xoxo
Rei