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SEQUEL!

Because this so isn't finished.

And since it's for my birthday (and Miya's), what I say goes. :P

Anyway, as always, I loved your writing. Two Toms, who could ask for more? (Well, me, but ... just saying: TWO TOMS!). *whispers* He had more Horcruxes. ;)

Thank you for our lovely birthday present.

*hugs*

Nerys

I love the plot. Plot is great. No, seriously, I enjoy your stories a lot. So don't be offended that I want to focus on the part that was just.. it was.. so... *giggles* Voldemort is the best. Voldemort plus begging - Christ, girl, I don't even have words. So well written too.
Why can't Voldemort be real? *weeps, weeps and weeps some more*

Nice! Update please!

OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD
please, please, please update soon!

I was SOOOOOO excited when you included the Knights! The shout out to Nerys was cute too ^_^ Now I'm going to lose sleep wondering if Hermione accidentally gave some sort of magical vow to Voldemort to tell him EVERYTHING >.< This is so exciting!

Ugh.. those women in the beginning are annoying.
"Resisting the urge to plant a firm kiss on those red lips, Hermione quickly entered Healer Nerys's office" - Lol, there are some lips you can't resist right? xD Like... like... Todd's xD

""If you don't mind, please tell her to visit me with her boyfriend soon. It's almost time for

Oooh, the plot is thickening! And we finally got to see Healer Nerys... and Curzon! HUUUUUUUUUUM. I wonder what that means. Are they friends? Are they working for Voldemort? (Why wouldn't that surprise me...) And YAY at the boyfriend part XD Although, I don't know how I feel about Nerys blabbering about "Paulina's" boyfriend's problems to strangers. Tsk, tsk, tsk. That's not very professional ;) But she did seem to be rather... easily sidetracked. I wonder why.

I'm really looking forward to see what will happen to Hermione and Harry now. Will they get their magic back? And what is "Todd" up to? Sneaky bastard, making Hermione promise to tell him everything. I'm sure he will take advantage over that sooner rather than later ;)

Also, have your writing style changed? I really liked it. Not that it wasn't good before, but somehow, some parts of this just seemed richer, in some ways. Just small details, like with the mouth that called Hermione into Nerys' office, and the aroma in Tibet. Oh, well, keep up the good work and thanks for updating :D

Nice chapter! I still miss the "Somewhere in Time" updates, but this story is starting to seem really interesting! Looking forward to your next chapter =)

So I'm reviewing this on AFF cos that is where the smut is at! and where the smut is, is where Shannie will be XD

Okay, so what a fascinating start! two years from the start Hermione has lost her magic and we find that Harry has as well... I'm very, very curious now. Several ideas are running through my head - including the revenge of a certain DL.

I enjoyed reading how you portrayed Ron and Hermione's separation. It felt very mature and I guess, yeah, they grew apart. I mean we all know that they aren't meant for/compatible for one-another anyway. And yeah, Nerys is completely right in my opinion. There is always one half of the couple who moves on quicker compared to the other. I felt a bit sorry for Hermione considering it was only 6 mths later!

Oh and yes, I think my cameo as the muggle sister was executed brilliantly OF COURSE!!! Yes, I know keeping Sirius and Alphard entertained means that I could have much more to do with Volde- *cough* I mean Todd. But that's okay, I'll just go home and get two certain other wizards to comfort me XPPPP

Oh, I like that little bit you included about her being suspicious about men who are "too good looking". I can definitely imagine Hermione thinking like that... plus she was always looking for more than a pretty face... lucky Todd is intelligent too! ;)

Ahhh and what's a good fanfic without a Malfoy peacock related joke hehehe *sniggers behind hand*

Oh and engaged after 3 mths!!! useless fact but my parents were engaged after such a short amount of time too!

Now, I'm interested in hearing more about the possibilities of death eater decoys, very interesting...

Very good smut scene! very realistic... and yes, of course he needs to dominate. Why do I get the feeling that the smut has something to do with him harvesting the powers? Hmm could be completely off though! Oh I will be guessing and guessing though!

And now we're off to meet Healer Nerys! hooray, can't wait for the next chapter! Any chance we'll get a Todd point of view??? I'm very curious!

Thanks for writing and sharing xox

Cheers
Shan

LOL @ Healer Nerys, how metafictional! Can't wait to see where you take us with this one...