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by sordidhumors

schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HEE! I remembered something I wanted to comment on like a bajillion chapters ago (ok, maybe exaggerated). I LOVE the fact that you counted Harry's encounter with Heather as a loss of virginity. I can't tell you how many times I have heard a girl say, "I'm still a virgin. I just give blow jobs." Everytime I hear it I'm like, WTF, are you serious? There's a reason its called oral SEX you moron! Anyway, I loved the grocery shopping they did. Draco sounded so cute. I would have loved to have been that girl and seen those two being all sweet and flirty while shopping. How sweet! And I love it every time Harry puts an Order member in their place. Although I love Tonks and always pictured her as one to help with the sneaking out, lol. And Hermione's prudish ass really needs to get laid. If I were Draco, I would fuck with her sensibilities hard!
person Sera21
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What?? Tequila with no lemon?? :D !! Its a sacrilage I say!!
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oi. And still he hasn't told him. I've a feeling this next chapter is going to he rough. No way will Ron and hermione not say anything about harry not going back. I keep hoping harry will change his mind or draco will decide to not go back too or something, anything so these two are not separated. I think the thing I love the most is that neither is really submissive, they are so very equal. I just love that.
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be the most disturbing line I have ever read: "The song she played to drown out the sound of her son being tortured." And it was just so casually thought by Draco, I read right over it and went, "Wait, what?" I mean, I knew his mother was in the house when he was being tortured. That line just really drove it home for me, how truly fucked up Narcissa Malfoy truly is to be able to sit by, playing the piano while her son is going through that. What a bitch. I imagine she got hers, though. The dark lord must have taken his anger at Draco's excape out on someone.
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a lot of food. I think I gained 10 pounds just reading that. I am soooo angsting over what is going to happen when Draco finds out Harry's not going back. I keep hoping he's going to change his mind. I loved the dates! All the sweet fluffiness. It was all so good! Although, I may have gotten a cavity. Next is when it all goes to shit, huh?
person Chelsea
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well. I have read plenty of Drarry in my lifetime and some have been the greatest Drarry of all time - just perfect.
Yours goes on that list. Keep on writing darlin'. <3
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hee HEE! I loved that last bit! Oooo, will Harry notice? Or Malfoy? Oh, I can't wait to see!

Ha! No freakin' way will we shoot you! We'd never get the rest of this story! >;).
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
80 chapters? Really? O.O

*snort* poor Ron. And those cockblockers are really going up there? Masochists lol. Especially Ginny. Why would she want to see that? Actually, wouldn't mind actually seeing it, lol. I am really glad the next chap is posted too. I'm going to read now....
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok, going to try again. Apparently my review for the last chapter didn't take. *pouts*

Oh, finally! Them getting caught was hilarious! Ron fainted! And Harry and Draco are so freaking hot together! You are jam up at steamy scenes! And there seems to be something else going on. These tingles? And Draco understanding parseltongue? Did I read that right? lol. My last review said I would be in stalker mode, because of the way you left it, but then something wonky happened, and I lost the review, had to go back through the story, and Lo' and behold! There was the next (this) chapter! So maybe I will get some sleep tonight! ;)


ps: I hate these damn security things. I think thats what ate my review!
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that was awesome! Malfoy's stonking great titties were hilarious! I can't help but thing he was using all his silliness to get through that without losing his shit, and Harry defending him like some damsel in distress was seriously fucking with his masculinity. The kiss was freaking brilliant. I am soooo glad the next few chaps are up already.