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Besides the story itself, which is awesome in its originality, I love how many languages and accents you have in here. You must have really a gift for this. I especially love Draco's accent. This is porn, but it has so much plot in it, you should write novels. I would pay for them.

This may very well be the single greatest piece of Harry Potter fanfiction I've ever read. Your writing is simply sublime. The characters, even the most minor of them, have a depth to them you rarely find in any work. I eagerly await the next chapter, and each one that follows.

Lady Sinister

Wonderfully written, can't wait for more. Intense fight scene, well thought out and done.

Leania

Just for the scene in the chapter called "Ingulgence", I went out and bought a pack of Djarum Blacks. They are very interesting, but too expensive to make a big impact on my smoking preferences: $12.83 for a pack of 10! The first was smoked in your honour!

ah, I'm surprised Draco managed to give such a decent blow job although he was that high, and, come to think of it, apparate both of them without ending up in the ocean say, or in free fall somewhere...as somebody who is living in a country where you can smoke most things legally( Netherlands) I would love to send you some stuff. However teh American customs are pretty stringent and as I'm not travelling there abouts any time soon I gotta disapoint you :P Thought the first 'I love you' was very well placed and very Harry and so much better then what many authors do and just throw in teh "I've always loved you" thing where theres porn porn porn OMG I love you * instant relationship*. Like sex= love. But then I think it may be that many of those authors are either 16 year olds or soccer moms >_<...possibly teh same genre who go to see Twilight movies. I like that you are using so many languages. I did cringe a bit at the Ramstein reference but then I spent many choice moments of my teen years in South Africa with friends enthusiastically singing along to the music not realizing how very very bad they sounded to the only person in the room/car who understood German(me). I like taht you made them go see some Metal though. Its not my genre in music but at least it is not Adele --___--. You get a home made space cookie for that ;P

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I like that you are using so many languages. I did cringe a bit at the Ramstein reference but then I spent many choice moments of my teen years in South Africa with friends enthusiastically singing along to the music not realizing how very very bad they sounded to the only person in the room/car who understood German(me). I like taht you made them go see some Metal though. Its not my genre in music but at least it is not Adele --___--. You get a home made space cookie for that ;P

Please PLEASE, correct your disclaimer so this wonderful story won't be deleted!!!!!

lol. I almost forgot to review. I was reading the forum.

OOOKaaay. *sighs* It wasn't as bad as I was expecting. Which I guess is saying something, since Draco freaked out. They're still together, so that's good. I wasn't looking forward to them not speaking to each other and being so far apart. I am really looking forward to later chapters after reading your replies to me! =) It sounds like you will be writing my most perfect combination of sex/plot/action ever! I can handle dark and angst, as long as Harry and Draco survive with their relationship intact. Erm, I'm embarrassed to say the I crave that HEA, so if that's not a possiblity, warn me now! I don't remember there being a major character death warning, so I am assuming I'm safe? I feel so bad for Draco. He's going to be all alone in Griffindor. I actually have to say though that I'm kind of glad you didn't put him there so he and Harry could shag like bunnies whenever they wanted. I'm not going to say that I don't like that cliche, because I do, its just nice to see someone not using it for a change. ;)

Good God. *fans self* That was some high quality, first rate Pulitzer prize winning porn right there. In fact, I don't even like calling it porn, it was that well done.

The wedding was so good! I wish they could have danced. That Phillipe is a major douce. I look forward to his slow and painful death. I adore these boys! They are so good together. I know more is posted, but I think it will have to wait until tomorrow. ;) I'm beat.

ur on adultfanfiction now!!!! I now have one more site to search for updates ^_^