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April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think is an incredible story line you have going on! It's super HOT and extremely well written to. I hope there are some new chapters that will soon bee ready for some great reading. Thanks!
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March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read chapter 42, and I had to stop and review.
First, the way you are outlining the Magic World of the Americas is amazing. I loved it. Just the set up of the field teams and the red-tape in dealing with the many American counterparts to British Intelligence, is genius. And spot on.
Second, I send a hearty thank you for Harry's musings on his personal bit of gay/non-gay thought. It was thought provoking and shows a sense of acceptance that I feel is lost in many slash-fic writers. I bow to you.
Thanks again, Bob.
First, the way you are outlining the Magic World of the Americas is amazing. I loved it. Just the set up of the field teams and the red-tape in dealing with the many American counterparts to British Intelligence, is genius. And spot on.
Second, I send a hearty thank you for Harry's musings on his personal bit of gay/non-gay thought. It was thought provoking and shows a sense of acceptance that I feel is lost in many slash-fic writers. I bow to you.
Thanks again, Bob.
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March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh an update, glad to see it! Another wonderful chapter, and very detailed. Of course Harry would be awesome as a Sniper, Seeker's not too far off, except your catching a Snitch instead of shooting one. Poor guys are going to be missing each other something fierce; if I remember correctly, Harry wasn't sure how long he'd be gone, but I have a feeling it's going to be a while. I await the next!
Leania
Leania
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
<3 This is an amazing story. You are a wonderful author and I really can't wait to find out what happens next. <3 The French and other myriad of foreign languages is a perfect touch. Thank you for writing such a compelling and thought provoking story.
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February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story- MORE PLEASE!! :)
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice, and Harry learned to drive a stick shift that fast hmm? For all my years 'assisting' my Aunt shifting gears, I still drive a manual. Awesome chapter by the way, he's still a bit touchy when people call him 'gay' or 'bi' hmm? Still in denial? Like the attitude at the end though, its not what others call them, but what they call each other. I'd be afraid of driving at a brick wall (or any wall) too, known magic barrier or not.
Leania
Leania
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this latest chapter, that's what Hermione gets when she tries to get someone to do something they don't want to. Guilt trips and cajoling, and he's supposed to 'play nice'? I loved it! Seems like Draco has the teaching style of Snape, learn the hard way ;).
I await the next chapter.
Leania
I await the next chapter.
Leania
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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter; I've been looking almost daily for your story. I'm quite enthralled thus far and (since I haven't read any previous stories of yours) I am hoping you finish this unlike the few I've grown to enjoy that are no longer updated and nowhere near complete. IMHO, Ron seems to 'just' realize certain things and perhaps grow up a bit, but still holds onto immature ways. It almost seems like he doesn't want Harry to have other friends, and that strikes a chord with me. I've had several friends with that kind of attitude, sad to say. I almost want to reach into the story and smack him around and say, "He has other friends who understand and can help him deal with things you have no knowledge of." LOL, its a good story when I respond to characters like that. Keep up the good work, and I await the next captivating chapter, Sir.
Leania
Leania
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January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I never leave reviews. Indeed, I can say with absolute certainty that this the 2nd review I have left in my 9+ years of reading fanfiction. You've earned it.
When I read books, I take the liberty of not giving a shit and sometimes change things in my head to better suit my fancy. For instance, Fred's not dead and that's all there is to it. However, when I read fanfiction, I just treat it as delicious fanwank; it doesn't contribute to how the story played out in the books for me. In some glorious shining cases, though, the plot is just believable enough, the characters just real enough, and the writing just beautiful enough that a new entirely valid world springs to life beside the original. I like to call these "Parallel Endings in Smut Filled Universes." Hah. And you, ma'am, have wrote the 3rd official "ending" of Harry Potter for me.
I'm not even caught up with what you have posted, and I know that there is more to come. I just had to let you know now, though. ;3
(I think you might have also broke me of my nasty habit of enjoying a fanfic without letting the author know.)
When I read books, I take the liberty of not giving a shit and sometimes change things in my head to better suit my fancy. For instance, Fred's not dead and that's all there is to it. However, when I read fanfiction, I just treat it as delicious fanwank; it doesn't contribute to how the story played out in the books for me. In some glorious shining cases, though, the plot is just believable enough, the characters just real enough, and the writing just beautiful enough that a new entirely valid world springs to life beside the original. I like to call these "Parallel Endings in Smut Filled Universes." Hah. And you, ma'am, have wrote the 3rd official "ending" of Harry Potter for me.
I'm not even caught up with what you have posted, and I know that there is more to come. I just had to let you know now, though. ;3
(I think you might have also broke me of my nasty habit of enjoying a fanfic without letting the author know.)
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January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Short but...um sweet? Honestly I was a bit mortified that the guys were doing that to Harry; then when I got to the part where Draco was talking to him, I was relieved. Woah, what a thing to throw at them; I'm grateful for the chapter but I wish it was a bit longer. Felt like just a teaser, you must have something up your sleeve. Can't wait for the next!